No Secrets

You said no secrets 
But you asking her for advice
You confide in her on the regular
No secrets
You said I was your best friend
No I feel displaced
How did I displace myself in your world
No secrets
Or you selfish
I bring you dinner to the job 
No avail
No secrets
You come home tired distant
No secrets
I smell her scent like a sweet smell of sensual
loving
No secrets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Galgiani Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 12:23 PM
I looked through a lot of your poetry. To me your writings seem to be of 'Free Verse' as if you are speaking to someone. You repeat many lines and words - this may be a style/form of poetry - I just don't know. Deep within yourself you are expressing for you want all to hear your voice...rg
Jackson Avatar
November 4, 2016 at 12:28 PM
Thank you Rhoda Galgiani I really appreciate your feed back. I'm just trying to share my thoughts with the world.
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