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No Secrets

You said no secrets But you asking her for advice You confide in her on the regular No secrets You said I was your best friend No I feel displaced How did I displace myself in your world No secrets Or you selfish I bring you dinner to the job No avail No secrets You come home tired distant No secrets I smell her scent like a sweet smell of sensual loving No secrets

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Date: 11/4/2016 12:23:00 PM
I looked through a lot of your poetry. To me your writings seem to be of 'Free Verse' as if you are speaking to someone. You repeat many lines and words - this may be a style/form of poetry - I just don't know. Deep within yourself you are expressing for you want all to hear your voice...rg
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Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 11/4/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Rhoda Galgiani I really appreciate your feed back. I'm just trying to share my thoughts with the world.

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