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No Satisfaction

“I can't get no satisfaction, I can't get no girl reaction 'Cause I try and I try and I try and I try“ (I Can’t Get No) Satisfaction by The Rolling Stones NO SATISFACTION Relinquishing clothes, unrestrained except for those blankets that keep us, until our skins warm, underneath. Tingling so close, there’s a rapture in magnetic attraction. Mussing with hair, touching his whiskers, the slowness of lips draped, the parting of their waves, the tongues talking without words, unexplained beauty. Breaths, beats forgotten, mind elsewhere attracted, until the peak of winterscape, where the wind moans, the wolf howls, the thunder of stallions’ throes, damp sheets in flames. Head looks to God with eyes closed Smiles on the ground beneath muscular riptide Knees no longer ache Arms prepared to lumberjack Dreamy eyes flutter Brunettes’ hair askew Blanketed cool flesh No satisfaction explained away rock’n roll our way 11/2/2020

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Date: 11/3/2020 4:24:00 AM
You have written such a sensual write Kim. Wow! There is such a beast inside you screaming to get out!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2020 5:01:00 AM
LOL! Thanks.
Date: 11/3/2020 2:34:00 AM
Great inspiration from a lovely song. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/3/2020 5:01:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 11/2/2020 3:39:00 PM
So sexy, Kim! Great write! Wow! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2020 5:58:00 PM
Thank you, Laura,
Date: 11/2/2020 3:15:00 PM
Kim, this is dreamy, romantic, and satisfying in all the right ways. Humming the song now... (it supplanted the Henry the Eighth one, thankfully) ~ John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2020 5:57:00 PM
Thanks, my wonderful friend!
Date: 11/2/2020 7:04:00 AM
Love that song and see how it inspired your poem...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2020 7:47:00 AM
Thanks :)

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