No Satisfaction

“I can't get no satisfaction, I can't get no girl reaction
'Cause I try and I try and I try and I try“

    (I Can’t Get No) Satisfaction by The Rolling Stones

NO SATISFACTION

Relinquishing clothes, unrestrained except for those
blankets that keep us, until our skins warm, underneath.
Tingling so close, there’s a rapture in magnetic attraction.
Mussing with hair, touching his whiskers, the slowness
of lips draped, the parting of their waves, the tongues
talking without words, unexplained beauty. Breaths, beats
forgotten, mind elsewhere attracted, until the peak of
winterscape, where the wind moans, the wolf howls,
the thunder of stallions’ throes, damp sheets in flames.

Head looks to God
with eyes closed
Smiles on the ground
   beneath muscular riptide
      Knees no longer ache
         Arms prepared to lumberjack
            Dreamy eyes
            flutter
            Brunettes’ hair askew
               Blanketed cool flesh
                  No satisfaction explained away
                     rock’n roll our way

                            11/2/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 4:24 AM
You have written such a sensual write Kim. Wow! There is such a beast inside you screaming to get out!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 5:01 AM
LOL! Thanks.
Buhagiar Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 2:34 AM
Great inspiration from a lovely song. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 5:01 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Leiser Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 3:39 PM
So sexy, Kim! Great write! Wow! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 5:58 PM
Thank you, Laura,
Watt Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 3:15 PM
Kim, this is dreamy, romantic, and satisfying in all the right ways. Humming the song now... (it supplanted the Henry the Eighth one, thankfully) ~ John
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 5:57 PM
Thanks, my wonderful friend!
One Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 7:04 AM
Love that song and see how it inspired your poem...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 7:47 AM
Thanks :)
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