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No Rhyme

The whole day spent 
With broken clouds
No taste nor colour
A boat drifting on
For aeons and aeons

Inside the moment 
Resides what not
Red bitter warm
Soft flute green
But the orange has left

In the boat so
No radar no rhyme
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1/10/2016
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Date: 10/2/2016 8:26:00 AM
- Great written enjoy reading, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/3/2016 4:46:00 AM
Thank you, Anne ...probir
Date: 10/2/2016 7:12:00 AM
Soft an delightful writing dear, Probir!
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Date: 10/2/2016 4:40:00 AM
A very mellow poem Probir. I enjoyed your poem, look forward to more of your work.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/2/2016 6:23:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/1/2016 9:07:00 AM
A very lazy, peaceful read, Probir.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/1/2016 10:48:00 AM
That is nice ... Thank you ...

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