No Rhyme

The whole day spent 
With broken clouds
No taste nor colour
A boat drifting on
For aeons and aeons

Inside the moment 
Resides what not
Red bitter warm
Soft flute green
But the orange has left

In the boat so
No radar no rhyme
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1/10/2016
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Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 8:26 AM
- Great written enjoy reading, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 4:46 AM
Thank you, Anne ...probir
Trifiatis Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 7:12 AM
Soft an delightful writing dear, Probir!
Farmer Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 4:40 AM
A very mellow poem Probir. I enjoyed your poem, look forward to more of your work.
Gupta Avatar
October 2, 2016 at 6:23 AM
Thank you ...
Turner Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 9:07 AM
A very lazy, peaceful read, Probir.
Gupta Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 10:48 AM
That is nice ... Thank you ...
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