No Recovery

From the depths it pains
How wretched a loveless heart
Broken and empty
Just a forsaken vessel
Relic to a love long lost 


Contest: Traditional Tanka
Sponsored By: Charlotte Jade Puddifoot
Written: 5/27/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 10:08 AM
A most fitting title to this one about the lovelorn.
Hoffman Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 8:31 PM
Thanks for stopping by and commenting Andrea, it's much appreciated
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