Sidney Beck Poet Quatrain

No, Really

NO,    REALLY. . . . . . 

‘That dress is nice’ means it is ok but it hardly amazes
‘No honestly, that dress is really nice’ means it is kinda nice-ish, oooh.
For genuine admiration I need to add more reassurance phrases: 
‘No, honestly, I absolutely think it is nice  - I really do’

‘Are you busy?’  means  “ I’ve got a  problem: stop and listen”
Indirect way of implying concern for the other, but not really.
But   “ I’m busy”  means   “Don’t come to me to unburden,
Don’t start getting emotional and all  touchy-feely.”

“How are you? Hey, lookin’ good”  is  a harmless salutation
But  please don’t give me any detailed answer, just nod.
I don’t have time for a complete and thorough investigation
Of all which is due to your health, your wealth and your God.

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Written by Sydney Peck
Entered in Nancy Jones’s  Contest      When I Say.... what I really mean is...

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Nancy Jones July 13, 2012 at 6:05 PM Gave you a blog on this one. Very nice write!!

Lori Lucas Mcclure July 4, 2012 at 10:36 AM Awesome write! Enjoyed the read! Lori

Nette Onclaud July 3, 2012 at 1:10 PM so, you turn the other cheek, KC... a superb write on contrast approach and it surely dives right into the theme... a winner way below mine, lol... :) huggs! Sidney Beck July 3, 2012 at 1:16 PM hey Young N, good to be in contact after a long absence....I was mega busy for months.....missed your rude and aggressive comments......hahaha with best wishes as always KC