No Pain

Today, I will not let you come in,
I have locked my door away from pain.
Today, only joy and happiness can come in,
I have unlocked my door for us to play.
Date Written: 2/13/2022
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A BRIAN STRAND 1090 Contest Judged:3/17/2022
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Laurie Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 3:40 PM
Hello Paula ... continual pain is a friend of nobody. Your final two lines put in a positive outcome Paula - Lindsay
Goldsmith Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 8:28 AM
Thanks for our note. So true pain is not a friend. Glad you like my positive last two lines. Blessings/smiles going your way...............
Skelly Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 3:09 AM
A very nice thought Paula, enjoyed this image...Delice
Goldsmith Avatar
February 16, 2022 at 10:42 AM
Thanks for our note. Glad you enjoyed this write. Blessings/smiles going your way...............
Watt Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 12:36 PM
Paula, I like your bite-size poem telling pain where you draw the line. Enjoy your day!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 12:57 PM
Thanks for our note. Glad you like this one. Yes, tell pain to go away. I wrote this for a friend. Blessings/smiles going your way...............
Wolf Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 8:47 PM
Great idea, Paula! No more bogeyman named 'Payne' entering your front door today! ~ Watch your backside (lol), gw
Goldsmith Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 12:55 PM
Thanks for our note. Glad you like this pain write. I have the front door and the back door covered. Blessings/smiles going your way...............
Baker Avatar
February 13, 2022 at 10:49 AM
It's a choice, the mind is a powerful thing. Block the pain and have some fun, Paula. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
Goldsmith Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 12:54 PM
Thanks for our note. Glad you like this write. Yes, the mind is very powerful. Blessings/smiles going your way...............
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