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No One Came

When I was in dire straits, the heartbeat of my life fading away No one came to my rescue When I cried out for help, calling on the calvary ... vision of a cross came to me It was dripping with blood, not my own The blood spelled a message on the ground: Pick up the heavenly phone, and call 764 before all hope is gone Son of God He can save your soul, but you can’t be afraid of letting this life go I did what was revealed to me, I called on the name of Jesus Christ urgently Suddenly my pulse of life started to get stronger, and I was determined to hold on longer Made a vow to help others who were in trouble, emergency situation Gave them the Doctor’s number on the double, prayer call for salvation The Son of God came to my rescue, when I cried out that fateful day If you see the message of the cross, I suggest you do what it say

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/17/2017 8:57:00 PM
Yes Freddie i agree. I would do as you say.There is a power in prayer. have a good evening my friend. peace and love.
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Date: 8/15/2017 3:11:00 AM
Hi Freddie, when we call , He answers and that is our comfort in this turbulence. When one day I run into you up there, may we reflect on what got us "there". The conscience of our wrongs that we attempted at straightening out , I guess. In the end it was only His mercy so profound.Yet a poet implores Him ,beseeches Him more urgently perhaps
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Date: 8/15/2017 2:12:00 AM
Inspiring words Freddie, I love it...Maria
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Date: 8/13/2017 10:09:00 AM
A beautifully strong and inspiring write, Freddie! A wonderful poem to share with others.:) Keep well & stay safe, love, Mikki
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Date: 8/13/2017 9:41:00 AM
Excellent Freddie! A favorite this is :)
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