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No Offense -But

No Offense - But

you take offense
		      to what I say

tell me I cannot say it

I take offence
		to your offense

you say Oh, No!!
		    that’s our defense

we find your words
			just too intense

they make….
		you know….
				just too much sense

we find your gaze
		         just so intrusive

a lingering look
		       oh how abusive

your voice…
		please keep it to a hush

lest fragile egos
		       you might crush

perhaps you should 
			just go away

you’re old
	        you’ve sadly
			      had your day

we take offense
		    to creaking bones

arthritic fingers
		    gnarled “flip phones”




we’ll raise our kids
		      without a lap

we’ll simply download
			  a parenting app

for we’ve been taught
			  that you are weak

and shouldn’t be
		     allowed to speak

for if you started
		      making sense

we’d have to stop
		         taking offense


John G. Lawless
©9/3/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/3/2018 8:28:00 AM
Nicely crafted my friend...no offense!...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 9/3/2018 8:12:00 AM
Lol! Dizzying brilliance ;) I love it. xomo
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John Lawless
Date: 9/3/2018 9:05:00 PM
Oh, Mo ... stop spinning and sit down.....

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