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      written February 12, 2025, for Sara Jama's My Bloody Valentine Contest

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You rescued me from loneliness in late autumn of my life. You taught me how to laugh again and bid adieu to strife. The emptiness that trapped my heart during many loveless years transformed to joy when you found me and wiped away my tears. It’s almost time, my Valentine, for our sweet, romantic night. Our plan to go out, dine, and dance fills me with pure delight. I feel so young again and~~ I see you coming through the door. You’re looking at me oddly, as you never have before. Behind your back, you have, I’ll bet, red roses, candy, lover mine? I feel the knife and hear, “Good-bye, my bloody Valentine.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 2/13/2025 5:27:00 AM
Intersting and thrilling,deceptive nature of love and betrayal unexpected at the end.Very beautiful.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/15/2025 9:07:00 AM
Akham, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 2/12/2025 12:26:00 PM
wow! great job, janice! perfect for the contest and a wonderfully unexpected surprise for the reader...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/12/2025 2:12:00 PM
Thanks a million, Ilene! Janice
Date: 2/12/2025 7:41:00 AM
That was a surprise ending Janice, I thoroughly enjoyed the read… Beryl
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/12/2025 7:44:00 AM
Thanks SO much, Beryl. The contest title is "My Bloody Valentine." Janice
Date: 2/12/2025 1:26:00 AM
Dear janice, love how youv written for the prompt and how theres a twist, in this, haunting and clever too of you to do an ending as such, and sad how some can turn out to be what they didnt seem to be initially. I love especially the cadence of your poem and how your lines just flow in such a seamless manner. Pleasure reading this. Best wishes for the contest. Sending you light always
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/12/2025 7:41:00 AM
Ink, you have MADE MY DAY! Thanks a million. Janice
Date: 2/11/2025 9:19:00 PM
my smile disappeared at 5th stanza! dear what a write!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/12/2025 7:40:00 AM
The contest title is "My Bloody Valentine"! I try to give sponsors what they ask for. :-) Thanks, Thriveni. Janice
Date: 2/11/2025 7:46:00 PM
Wow. Quite the shock ending. Well done!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/11/2025 8:56:00 PM
Thanks so much, Chetta. The contest title is My Bloody Valentine. I try to give the sponsors what they ask for. :-) Janice

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