No, Not I

To snatch a moment of time,
weave it into something tangible.
(No, not I).

Create imagery with words that dance,
around and behind the eyes.
(No.  Not I).

Pull emotions by blending,
amounts of self, facts and fiction.
(No, not I).

Holding the soul of the reader close,
so that they live that moment.
(Not I).

Accepting you have failed
and nothing more needs be written down.
(I).


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 8, 2010 at 4:49 PM
Very unique write Paula... enjoyed your setup with your poem.. great wisdom in your lines too.. with luv.. miss your contests my friend..
Mills Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 4:30 PM
One I have not seen yet. very good
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July 8, 2010 at 3:40 PM
Awesome poem. Much enjoyed. Wonderfully perceptive introspection. Love, Susan
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