No Need For Drink

Her quivering breath
Is like five shots of whiskey -- 
Intoxicating.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
November 26, 2012 at 12:09 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this afternoon Dylan. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 11:09 AM
Very good.
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November 24, 2012 at 10:20 AM
- Well written, Dylan ! I wish you a pleasant and relaxed weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Ellison Avatar
November 24, 2012 at 5:19 AM
You words describe that moment exquisitely my friend! Have a great day!
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