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No More Suffering

NO MORE SUFFERING Holding back the bygone years on rumination in vain? Forgetting past stress and strain I rejoice. Mind is clear. Holding back the flowing tears, thorny bushes to remain? No use. I clean my garden removing weeds with sharp shears. I have wasted all the years, worries almost to be slain. New hope and zeal to regain. overcoming barriers. I have wasted all my tears not to shed more, but refrain! Neither to rue nor complain, but to enrapture self! Cheers! 05/27/ 19 Rhyming scheme abba abba abba abba 7 syllables per line. Fourth Place Song Chosen : Holding back the years 'Musical Inspiration; Contest by Joseph May

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Date: 6/7/2019 11:38:00 AM
Hi Anisha: Your rhythm and imagery are so close to the original context. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/7/2019 8:02:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/6/2019 2:25:00 PM
Very nicely penned Anisha, Congrats on your win..
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 6/7/2019 1:56:00 AM
Thanks Joseph for appreciation in your contest.

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