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No More Me and You

I felt the vibe radiate from your body language the night before. I knew it was too late as I opened your unlocked apartment door! The carpet still showed indentions of furniture that had once been there. Bare walls showed off white dimensions of picture frames that once hung there. I said a silent prayer, hoping you left something behind. Not one piece of furniture anywhere, and I felt I would lose my mind. I searched each room looking for a sign; a clue. But this empty apartment didn't take an Einstein, to figure out there was no more me and you!! *Written strictly for Matt Caliri's contest "Empty Apartment" Free-verse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2010 2:07:00 PM
Very well-written, Free verse, Jam! Here's wishing you good luck in Matt's "Empty Apartment" Contest! Love, Audrey
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