No Moon

Well lit light in dark old sky Hue of gold on tree top high Climb up high and caught him right No moon this day no need cry.

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Eve Roper

Date: 3/12/2020 6:58:00 PM

I love the imagery in this verse, Jenish, great example

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/12/2020 10:59:00 PM

Thank you Eve for your kind support..

Beata Agustin

Date: 3/11/2020 2:33:00 AM

Wow! Awesome! Thanks for this, a great example of what your contest requires. God bless you.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/11/2020 2:46:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comment.. Have a great day..

Constance La France

Date: 3/9/2020 10:28:00 AM

Jenish, very nice_Constance

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/9/2020 1:54:00 PM

Thank you..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/24/2020 11:09:00 AM

Good luck in the contest Jenish - I heartfelt piece of poetry wonderful imagery - Blessings, Jennifer.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/24/2020 11:47:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer.. Not for the contest..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/24/2020 6:27:00 AM

Does seem that one could just crawl up there and touch the moon and maybe jump right on and go for a moonwalk. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/24/2020 6:32:00 AM

lol.. Your comment is more beautiful than my poem.. Thanks..

Sanjay Karmakar

Date: 2/23/2020 11:18:00 AM

Why! I am crying my dear poet. Without a lit night is unbearable. I like the beam of rays. Good luck dear poet. sk.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/23/2020 11:30:00 AM

Lol..I was just trying a different form..

Eve Roper

Date: 2/23/2020 9:06:00 AM

Jenish, you have captured the hue of colors and imagery of the prompt. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Jenish Somadas
Date: 2/23/2020 9:22:00 AM

Thank you..I made mistake..For the contest minimum 14 lines..