No Moon

Well lit light in dark old sky
Hue of gold on tree top high
Climb up high and caught him right
No moon this day no need cry.
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Roper Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 6:58 PM
I love the imagery in this verse, Jenish, great example
Somadas Avatar
March 12, 2020 at 10:59 PM
Thank you Eve for your kind support..
Agustin Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 2:33 AM
Wow! Awesome! Thanks for this, a great example of what your contest requires. God bless you.
Somadas Avatar
March 11, 2020 at 2:46 AM
Thank you for your kind comment.. Have a great day..
La France Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 10:28 AM
Jenish, very nice_Constance
Somadas Avatar
March 9, 2020 at 1:54 PM
Thank you..
Proxenos Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 11:09 AM
Good luck in the contest Jenish - I heartfelt piece of poetry wonderful imagery - Blessings, Jennifer.
Somadas Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Thank you Jennifer.. Not for the contest..
Kendrick Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 6:27 AM
Does seem that one could just crawl up there and touch the moon and maybe jump right on and go for a moonwalk. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Somadas Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 6:32 AM
lol.. Your comment is more beautiful than my poem.. Thanks..
Karmakar Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 11:18 AM
Why! I am crying my dear poet. Without a lit night is unbearable. I like the beam of rays. Good luck dear poet. sk.
Somadas Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 11:30 AM
Lol..I was just trying a different form..
Roper Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 9:06 AM
Jenish, you have captured the hue of colors and imagery of the prompt. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Somadas Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Thank you..I made mistake..For the contest minimum 14 lines..
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