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No Means No

Strangers giving each other a motoring, inquisitive eye Jotting down digital information as they recklessly pass by Inhibitions are placed under chemical arrest Club Le Box is playing jailhouse music, making sweaty bodies confess Weekend pheromone prisoners with their feet handcuffed to the dance floor Looking for the key to release them, unlock the chastity cell door Sexually magnetic coded words are the key: loose the cuffs, open the door ... set the passions free Having an escape party good time with a new, casual partner in crime Scan options on the getaway menu, select tactile facial sensation Seeking more privacy to continue those opposite sex flirtations He suggest going to her place, he says there she will feel safe Got penile thoughts on his hormonal mind, however, she is not yet so intimately inclined So she tells him no, a simple monosyllable rebuff Her desires are getting turned off, as his demeanor is becoming too rough She gives another emphatic no, and brushes his hand away from down below She raises the stop sign in his face, as he was attempting to round third base No means no, she says with a firm tone of finality If he don't respect her change of heart, truly ... he'll be practicing pick up lines in a penitentiary

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/16/2017 11:57:00 PM
Freddie this is a wonderful poem about a delicate issue which should be broadly discussed to stop violating a women's consent and taking them for granted. It reminds me of an Indian movie called 'pink' recently made; core message of that film is 'No means no'. Wonderful job with this one, Freddie. 7+
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Date: 4/8/2017 11:11:00 AM
Hi Freddie, I agree with you 100% in this well written poem. I don't care if it's a spouse, partner or etc. When a lady says "NO" no-one should try to violate her in any way. A without a doubt seven- Alexis
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Date: 4/7/2017 10:47:00 PM
Freddie, your words painted a vivid picture of the scene in my mind, and I liked the humorous touches in your writing:) Amitiés
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Date: 4/7/2017 2:31:00 PM
You aptly handled this subject! Well done, Freddie!
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Date: 4/7/2017 2:23:00 PM
Yeah, in the slammer unless she slams his arse in the ground right there. :) Cool poem, nice message my friend.
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Date: 4/7/2017 1:42:00 PM
Got a good rap beat, not to mention the lesson. Well done Freddie...
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