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No Love Requited Left To Claim

Tonight, the rains gush down upon my life, Like shards of glass they cut through every vein. Your footsteps, plodding heavily with strife, Regretful puddles echoing your pain. To walk away can be the hardest thing, When there’s no love requited left to claim. Though better than to die amidst the cling To hope, my heart, for yours, will feel the same. The passion swells, though muted by the grief, And all the growing distance seems so wrong. Then suddenly I’m cast into belief, For you, I’d held affection all along. If there was but one thing I’d wish to say, My absent tongue would call to you, “Please stay!” 23rd November 2019 Midnight Aurora

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Date: 12/31/2019 5:51:00 PM
Blessings for 2020. I enjoyed giving this one another read.
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Date: 12/30/2019 10:31:00 PM
Absolutely Beautiful, MA. Hope you have a Healthy and Happy New Year!. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 12/22/2019 8:47:00 AM
Not written in a while... You must be busy .
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Date: 12/21/2019 5:13:00 AM
Lovely touching sonnet! Why the absent tongue? My heart says to you- please stay! I loved this poem' please keep writing!
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Date: 12/18/2019 5:59:00 PM
I have not written many sonnets but when I do, it would be my wish to write one as beautiful as this one. Well done and thanksfor your visit.hugs Rick.
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Date: 12/17/2019 7:39:00 AM
Hmmm, are you truly new here, if so you join very few on the soup who can write a perfectly metered , rhymed, and phrased English Sonnet - I'm impressed!
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Date: 11/25/2019 11:05:00 AM
You captured heartbreak very well in this poem. Wonderfully penned. love phyl
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Date: 11/25/2019 8:10:00 AM
There is nothing worse than a broken heart. Great pen Midnight! Awesome write! Charlie
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Date: 11/25/2019 8:06:00 AM
"Tonight, the rains gush down upon my life, Like shards of glass they cut through every vein." These two opening lines capture the painful essence of heart break so wonderfully. I know this feeling first hand, it has become a part of me. This entire poem is fantastic. I can feel this throughout.
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Date: 11/23/2019 7:02:00 PM
Wow, It's sounds like you know the same pain as me! Though I am guessing many do, heartbreak is nothing new!
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Date: 11/23/2019 5:40:00 PM
Heartbreaking MA but...well written, tells me you know something about this feeling to express it so well. Thanks for posting!
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Date: 11/23/2019 2:06:00 PM
Oooo . . .
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Date: 11/23/2019 1:05:00 PM
Nothing hurts like lost love....
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 11/23/2019 1:26:00 PM
Yes. It can be the making or the breaking of you...
Date: 11/23/2019 12:46:00 PM
Longing and love throughout with sad overtones--elegant write, MA. Great ending.
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 11/23/2019 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Vijay.
Date: 11/23/2019 12:34:00 PM
Full of longing. Very well written to lead the reader to feel it. I hope you have a nice day :)
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Midnight Aurora
Date: 11/23/2019 1:24:00 PM
How lovely. Thank you Heidi. Hope you have wonderful day too :)

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