No Looking Back, M'Lady

Rob Carmack's Premiere Viii open contest 

No looking back, m'lady.
to the long days spent in that garden. 
No looking back on the labors of love --	
watering and pruning and waiting.
You remember the vibrant smell
of un-cut lilacs on the bush.

You are no longer a lady in waiting.
For he has chosen you to
replace his first love.
Wearing now her fine clothes
which you helped fashion into their loveliness.
Do not be ill-at-ease.

Recalling how often on your knees
you polished this very same floor to perfection.
Be reminded of your new task.
Your new calling - you must make of him
the man he never was, the man he can be.
No looking back, m'lady.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Scars Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 7:55 AM
no there shouldn't be any looking back. great poem all around dear Poteet, may you be blessed today. ~ thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-) ~luloo
Poteet Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Thanks, Lu Loo, glad to participate always and happy with the placement. Appreciate your blessing, I ate Thanksgiving Feast with my kindergarten grandson and got my hair done, in that order.
Chiri Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 4:25 PM
Congratulations on your win!;)
Poteet Avatar
November 21, 2019 at 7:31 PM
TY, Brenda for the encouragement and support.
Merryman Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 11:25 PM
Beautifully written, Reason! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
Scars Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 8:20 AM
very thought provoking..."the man he never was, the man he can be." my favorite line in the poem- wraps it up perfectly. sorry for the delayed comment! :)-luloo
Mehta Avatar
January 31, 2014 at 7:58 PM
Enjoyed the write and congrats on the fine win, Reason
A   Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 9:22 PM
Reason, a nice little free verse poem :-) congratulations~ LINDA
Morrison Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 8:23 PM
Very elegant well written poem! Thank you for submitting this to my contest.
Jerden Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 2:51 PM
Sort of "My Fair Lady" turned upside down, I gather. Very nice! Congratulations!
A   Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 5:27 PM
Reason, :-) Congratulations ~ Thanks for supporting my "descriptive poem" contest. Always yours truly* Linda
Lamoureux Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 11:24 PM
This is both alluring and disturbing at the same time. A very effective piece.
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