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No Longer Longing

ethereal coupling waiting finally over coming together as one soul surrounded by ancestral bliss unsurmountable moon magic summoned by the gods of love and lust acute wanting finally satisfied no longer longing for moments like this this memory lasting forever in both of their souls Written 1-23-2019 Contest: Picture Prompt Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brenda Chiri

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Date: 1/28/2020 12:11:00 AM
My dear county friend! Wow I loved where you went with this poem! Catching my attention and deserving of its top win! Lol congratulations my friend;)
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Date: 1/24/2020 4:41:00 AM
Nice one. Ethereal coupling. Very interesting. Best wishes, Kai
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:49:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 1/23/2020 11:48:00 PM
I enjoyed the beautiful words and imagery, Caren. Good luck in the contest.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Evelyn. Weirdly coincidentally, the sponsor of the contest and I grew up in tiny Iowa towns about eight miles apart.
Date: 1/23/2020 8:48:00 PM
It must be a beautiful feeling! Nicely done, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:54:00 AM
The photo was quite inspirational.
Date: 1/23/2020 6:37:00 PM
I was kinda looking forward to some 'ethereal coupling' :-) Cool write!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:54:00 AM
Smile. Smile. Grin. Grin.
Date: 1/23/2020 1:39:00 PM
This is gorgeous- two soulmates meeting in the afterlife! Terrific writing! ;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:54:00 AM
I do think this is where our REAL life begins....
Date: 1/23/2020 12:44:00 PM
I like the title, "No Longer Longing" Nice one...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:54:00 AM
Thank you Arturo. I hope all is well. I think of you fondly.

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