Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

No Longer Longing

ethereal coupling 
waiting finally over
coming together as one soul
surrounded by ancestral bliss
unsurmountable moon magic

summoned by the gods
of love and lust 
acute wanting finally satisfied
no longer longing for moments like this
this memory lasting forever 
in both of their souls




Written 1-23-2019
Contest: Picture Prompt Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brenda Chiri

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Brenda Chiri January 28, 2020 at 12:11 AM My dear county friend! Wow I loved where you went with this poem! Catching my attention and deserving of its top win! Lol congratulations my friend;)

Kai Michael Neumann January 24, 2020 at 4:41 AM Nice one. Ethereal coupling. Very interesting. Best wishes, Kai Caren Krutsinger January 24, 2020 at 5:49 AM Thank you my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 23, 2020 at 11:48 PM I enjoyed the beautiful words and imagery, Caren. Good luck in the contest. Caren Krutsinger January 24, 2020 at 5:50 AM Thank you Evelyn. Weirdly coincidentally, the sponsor of the contest and I grew up in tiny Iowa towns about eight miles apart.

Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2020 at 8:48 PM It must be a beautiful feeling! Nicely done, Caren. Caren Krutsinger January 24, 2020 at 5:54 AM The photo was quite inspirational.

Eric Ashford January 23, 2020 at 6:37 PM I was kinda looking forward to some 'ethereal coupling' :-) Cool write! Caren Krutsinger January 24, 2020 at 5:54 AM Smile. Smile. Grin. Grin.

Rhona Mcferran January 23, 2020 at 1:39 PM This is gorgeous- two soulmates meeting in the afterlife! Terrific writing! ;) Caren Krutsinger January 24, 2020 at 5:54 AM I do think this is where our REAL life begins....

Arturo Michael January 23, 2020 at 12:44 PM I like the title, "No Longer Longing" Nice one... Caren Krutsinger January 24, 2020 at 5:54 AM Thank you Arturo. I hope all is well. I think of you fondly.