No Longer Longing

ethereal coupling 
waiting finally over
coming together as one soul
surrounded by ancestral bliss
unsurmountable moon magic

summoned by the gods
of love and lust 
acute wanting finally satisfied
no longer longing for moments like this
this memory lasting forever 
in both of their souls




Written 1-23-2019
Contest: Picture Prompt Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brenda Chiri

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/28/2020 12:11:00 AM
My dear county friend! Wow I loved where you went with this poem! Catching my attention and deserving of its top win! Lol congratulations my friend;)
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Date: 1/24/2020 4:41:00 AM
Nice one. Ethereal coupling. Very interesting. Best wishes, Kai
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:49:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 1/23/2020 11:48:00 PM
I enjoyed the beautiful words and imagery, Caren. Good luck in the contest.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Evelyn. Weirdly coincidentally, the sponsor of the contest and I grew up in tiny Iowa towns about eight miles apart.
Date: 1/23/2020 8:48:00 PM
It must be a beautiful feeling! Nicely done, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:54:00 AM
The photo was quite inspirational.
Date: 1/23/2020 6:37:00 PM
I was kinda looking forward to some 'ethereal coupling' :-) Cool write!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:54:00 AM
Smile. Smile. Grin. Grin.
Date: 1/23/2020 1:39:00 PM
This is gorgeous- two soulmates meeting in the afterlife! Terrific writing! ;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:54:00 AM
I do think this is where our REAL life begins....
Date: 1/23/2020 12:44:00 PM
I like the title, "No Longer Longing" Nice one...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 1/24/2020 5:54:00 AM
Thank you Arturo. I hope all is well. I think of you fondly.
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