No Journey Without the First Step

journey's amidst life is it a monkey puzzle reaching ones haven many travels unravelled the reward of a sweet rose .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 12:35 AM
James, lovely rose isn't it? ;) witty tanka.. your lil one~Olive Eloisa hugsxxx
Fraser Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 1:04 PM
Glad you enjoyed my witty write, and yes indeed it's a beautiful Rose ~~ hugs//James ~~ xx
Onclaud Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 2:20 PM
now this is really creative, james... that rose is worth it all.. huggs
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 12:36 AM
Thanks much for that wonderful comment James. much appreciated..=`)
Fraser Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 2:51 PM
She certainly is Nette, she's wonderful, and will always bloom in my eyes. Hugs//James :)
Allison Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 2:09 PM
Delightful tanka James:-) hugs Jan xx
Fraser Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Hi Jan, I missed the contest, but I'd already started it so I thought it's better to continue ~~ Hugs ~~ James xx
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