No House For the Louse

My love said to meet him at three
where steaks were the best that could be, 
the chophouse.

I waited a long time and then
checked his firm before searching in
the courthouse.

Maybe drinks with clients for biz?
I checked a fav place for this, his
posh clubhouse.

Nothing, was he up to no good
somewhere no man does as he should -
the dollhouse?

There, I saw my beau kiss Miss Snow
so now he is found in Fido's
cold doghouse.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mumo Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 1:19 PM
A subtle thought provoker woven in terse poetic overtures. They're a story of your either real or fictive encounters...but, even more resonating, the ubiquitous aberrations bedevilling the modern-day dating/matrimonial forte. Thanks for sharing!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 1, 2020 at 4:30 AM
So funny CayCay. I loved this cute entry. Hugs Connie xxoo
Proxenos Avatar
May 17, 2020 at 2:21 AM
LOL, LOL, Dollhouse,Clubhouse,Courthouse or chophouse - but kissing Miss Snow - Fido's cold doghouse too good for him! Mat on the cold porch sounds good enough! Blessings, Hugs and kisses Jennifer - good luck in the contest! Blessings, Jennifer.
Tor Avatar
May 16, 2020 at 2:55 AM
You gave a mans castle a new meaning. lol. Enjoyed CaYcay
Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 9:35 PM
hahaha, GOOD ONE, CaYcay, I see you took the challenge and at least you ended up with a funny one!! YOu were very clever.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 10:56 PM
Well done! The chophouse indeed!
Wolf Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 9:37 PM
Were I Fido, I wouldn't let the louse in... Dog-house is way too good for him. lol. Thanks, CayCay, for the laughs! :) gw
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