No House For the Louse

My love said to meet him at three
where steaks were the best that could be, 
the chophouse.

I waited a long time and then
checked his firm before searching in
the courthouse.

Maybe drinks with clients for biz?
I checked a fave place for this, his
posh clubhouse.

Nothing, was he up to no good
somewhere no man does as he should -
the dollhouse?

There, I saw my beau kiss Miss Snow
so now he is found in Fido's
cold doghouse.

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Date: 7/27/2020 1:19:00 PM
A subtle thought provoker woven in terse poetic overtures. They're a story of your either real or fictive encounters...but, even more resonating, the ubiquitous aberrations bedevilling the modern-day dating/matrimonial forte. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 6/1/2020 4:30:00 AM
So funny CayCay. I loved this cute entry. Hugs Connie xxoo
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Date: 5/17/2020 2:21:00 AM
LOL, LOL, Dollhouse,Clubhouse,Courthouse or chophouse - but kissing Miss Snow - Fido's cold doghouse too good for him! Mat on the cold porch sounds good enough! Blessings, Hugs and kisses Jennifer - good luck in the contest! Blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/16/2020 2:55:00 AM
You gave a mans castle a new meaning. lol. Enjoyed CaYcay
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Date: 5/15/2020 9:35:00 PM
hahaha, GOOD ONE, CaYcay, I see you took the challenge and at least you ended up with a funny one!! YOu were very clever.
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Date: 5/14/2020 10:56:00 PM
Well done! The chophouse indeed!
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Date: 5/14/2020 9:37:00 PM
Were I Fido, I wouldn't let the louse in... Dog-house is way too good for him. lol. Thanks, CayCay, for the laughs! :) gw
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