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Hope is a collage of fragmented thoughts that fan the embers of today, scattered amidst yesterday's ashes. Stoking the sputtering flames of tomorrow egos and monsters parade brazenly amongst thoughts of love, demanding your attention. Betrayal is a bitter pill to swallow, and yet, you try washing it down with tears. For broken hearts oft draw painful emotions from the wounds of memory, like a poultice. And so, you don one of your many masks stored upon life's shelf, and smile as your world falls apart. But as the dagger of rejection pieces your heart, there can be no greater pain. For you have failed to find what you've been looking for all your life, an eternal soulmate to complete the missing half of your soul. (Free Verse) 04/15/2020

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Date: 5/23/2020 6:45:00 PM
This is heartfelt Emile. I am sure nothing can offer relief for the loss of one's soulmate but memories are threads we hold onto. God bless you. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 5/24/2020 7:34:00 AM
Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/23/2020 12:56:00 PM
Another wonderful write Emile, touched me deeply, I think your emotional writes are your best, at least that's what I enjoy most. Congrats on a fine shared first place...so many great entries this time!
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Date: 5/23/2020 1:41:00 PM
Thanks John, as always I appreciate the placement and your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/15/2020 11:24:00 PM
As always vivd and powerful imagery Emile. You have gone right to the heart of betrayal and the ways we try to deal with it. Really nice.
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Date: 4/16/2020 9:23:00 AM
Thanks Sam, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/15/2020 11:21:00 PM
Emile, You put a fine philosophical point on the pen in this write. What mask will we wear to earn the coins needed to pay the ferryman I wonder? -Richard
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Date: 4/16/2020 9:25:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I appreciate it, we all have our masks my friend, Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs