No Greater Love

You're pregnant. 
The doctor confirms what I already knew
And the fear and shock set in.
I'm to young, 
Only 20, to immature
I'm not ready. 
But this little person is a part of me
And I already love it. 

It's a boy. 
Four ultrasounds later I finally know what you are
And I cry. 
I was hoping for a pink baby
And I'm hormonal and scared. 
How do you raise a boy?
What will he like?
But I already loved him with all of me. 

It's time.
After three trips to the hospital for pre-term labor
It's finally real now. 
Twenty-nine hours in labor in the hospital
Almost three hours of pushing
And I see him
And I hold him
And I know in that moment my life has begun. 

Before that day I was selfish
And on a downward spiral of self-destruction
But from that moment on
My life was you
And I may have given you life
My dear sweet love
But on the day I realized I was carrying you,
You saved mine. 

You will always be
The only man that mommy will ever need
And with every second
Of every day
I will love you
More than the moment before
And I will keep and protect you
For the rest of time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Boddie Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 1:31 PM
such a Beautiful tribute Brittney....God Blessed you so evidently....it was meant to be just to make you better....I am glad for you that you got yourself together....;)
A  Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 11:29 AM
Brittney, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Kimathi Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 8:34 AM
A wonderful bundle of joy indeed!!! Congratulations for your #1 placement Brittney!!! ;-)
A. Sharma Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 2:16 AM
Wonderful write Brittney! Congrats on superb win!
Tyler Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Thanks
Williams Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 1:19 AM
Well done. Congrats on your win.
Y. Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 12:12 AM
Brittany, I can totally relate to this poem. My children are my life. Congratulations on your 1st place win it was well deserved:-)Alexis 7
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 6:14 PM
I can't imagine my life without my son - such an heartfelt touching write - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Tyler Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Thank you. My kids are my world.
Godwin Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 2:33 PM
Hi, Brittney - I don't know that we've ever visited each other's poems before. I want to congratulate you on your win with this heart-warming write. I, too, wrote about giving birth to my one and only, my baby boy. Isn't it something how after you give birth, the sky is bluer, the grass greener, all that touches our senses, is enhanced! Again, good win, girl ... CayCay
Tyler Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 9:27 AM
CayCay- thanks and congrats on your win as well. It is crazy how giving birth can completely change your whole life. I always tell my kids that they are all the best parts of their father and me put together to form perfect bundles of pure love
Inman Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 12:07 PM
Beautiful write Brittney.
Inman Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 2:58 PM
I've found NEED to be an unhealthy emotion that gives away control of one's life (just my opinion), but the desire to share your life is a different and potentially beautiful thing.
Tyler Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 2:19 PM
Thank you, my little guy is 10 years old now, and not so little, but still the only man I need.
Negron Flores Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations.
Tyler Avatar
October 7, 2015 at 2:18 PM
thanks
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