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No Goodbyes

No Goodbyes Acrostic N ever has anyone been able to capture my soul O nly you have my heart, using remote control G one are the days of my never ending solitude O vercast shadows dissipate, with my newfound mood O bvious to all my heart and soul are all yours D estiny has infused your fragrance, into my pores B eauty is internal, not what's seen only with the eyes Y our essence has consumed me, and finally I realize E verything you do and say, to me is oh, so kindly S eparation is impossible, because I love you blindly. John Derek Hamilton November 26,2015 Goodbyes are only for those who love with their eyes because for those who love with heart and soul there is no such thing as separation. Rumi

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Date: 12/17/2015 12:55:00 PM
John, CONGRATULATIONS on your nice win. ~SKAT~
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/30/2016 12:24:00 PM
Thanks SKAT
Date: 12/15/2015 5:53:00 PM
Very nicely written John...the more I read the more I enjoy your poems...*smiles*
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/15/2015 8:10:00 PM
Thanks Laura same with me, your work is excellent, I enjoy it more each time.
Date: 12/15/2015 4:04:00 PM
Lovely, John. Congratulations on your win and placement. Sandra
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/15/2015 8:08:00 PM
Thanks 2nd time round for this one.
Date: 12/15/2015 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/15/2015 8:07:00 PM
Thanks Nayda
Date: 12/7/2015 1:31:00 AM
I love this beautiful poem. No wonder it won, John - it is a lovely, emotional and heartfelt gift of poetry. So very romantic. CayCay
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/7/2015 10:30:00 AM
Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments
Date: 12/5/2015 3:35:00 PM
Vey well expressed! Congrats.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/5/2015 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Richard nice for you to visit and comment, very much appreciated.
Date: 12/4/2015 2:00:00 PM
Very beautifully written, John, and so deserving of your First Place win. Congratulations to you! Sandra
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/4/2015 3:32:00 PM
Thanks you Sandra, coming from you an accomplished poet, is an honor.John
Date: 12/4/2015 11:23:00 AM
Wow!! Very nice write!! Congrats!!
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/4/2015 3:31:00 PM
Thanks Sarita for your visit and kind comment.
Date: 12/4/2015 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/4/2015 6:59:00 AM
Thanks Nayda.
Date: 12/4/2015 1:24:00 AM
Wonderful write in this form, John. Congrats on your win.
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/4/2015 6:58:00 AM
Thanks a lot Dan
Date: 12/3/2015 10:36:00 PM
Ah John such a beauty.. heartfelt write.. congrats on top podium!
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2015 11:02:00 PM
Thanks DR always appreciate your words of encouragement.
Date: 12/3/2015 7:46:00 PM
Oh John....I Love, love, love this wonderful poem!! Straight into my fave's file it goes. Congratulations on your most deserving top win. You touched my soul with your words. Certainly a #7. Blessings, Connie
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2015 10:02:00 PM
Wow! I am shocked, by your complimentary words, thank you so much for liking it. Sometimes it just feels right coming out right? You know it, you are very talented. Thanks again
Date: 12/3/2015 6:52:00 PM
John, congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2015 9:59:00 PM
Thanks Alexis.
Date: 12/3/2015 6:29:00 PM
well done, John
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2015 9:57:00 PM
Thanks Lin always appreciated.John
Date: 12/3/2015 5:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Beautiful write!
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2015 9:56:00 PM
Thanks Eve always appreciate your support.
Date: 12/3/2015 5:22:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats John:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/3/2015 5:14:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your Quoting Rumi Win. SKAT ** Love
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John Hamilton
Date: 12/3/2015 9:54:00 PM
Thanks Skat you are so kind. John
Date: 11/26/2015 6:35:00 PM
Wonderful John! I love where you took this poem, gl in the contest! :)-lu *smiles*
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/27/2015 9:39:00 AM
Thanks Laura for your positive feedback, and visits. Have a great day. JDH
Date: 11/26/2015 12:27:00 PM
beautifully penned acrostic good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/26/2015 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Jan felt good as it flowed. Thanks for your kind visit. JDH

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