John Hamilton Poet Acrostic

No Goodbyes

No Goodbyes Acrostic

N ever has anyone been able to capture my soul
O nly you have my heart, using remote control

G one are the days of my never ending solitude
O vercast shadows dissipate, with my newfound mood
O bvious to all my heart and soul are all yours
D estiny has infused your fragrance, into my pores
B eauty is internal, not what's seen only with the eyes
Y our essence has consumed me, and finally I realize
E verything you do and say, to me is oh, so kindly
S eparation is impossible, because I love you blindly.


John Derek Hamilton
November 26,2015


Goodbyes are only for those who love with their eyes
because for those who love with heart and soul
there is no such thing as separation. Rumi

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Skat A December 17, 2015 at 12:55 PM John, CONGRATULATIONS on your nice win. ~SKAT~ John Hamilton January 30, 2016 at 12:24 PM Thanks SKAT

Beautiful Scars December 15, 2015 at 5:53 PM Very nicely written John...the more I read the more I enjoy your poems...*smiles* John Hamilton December 15, 2015 at 8:10 PM Thanks Laura same with me, your work is excellent, I enjoy it more each time.

Sandra Haight December 15, 2015 at 4:04 PM Lovely, John. Congratulations on your win and placement. Sandra John Hamilton December 15, 2015 at 8:08 PM Thanks 2nd time round for this one.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 15, 2015 at 10:56 AM Congratulations John. John Hamilton December 15, 2015 at 8:07 PM Thanks Nayda

CayCay Godwin December 7, 2015 at 1:31 AM I love this beautiful poem. No wonder it won, John - it is a lovely, emotional and heartfelt gift of poetry. So very romantic. CayCay John Hamilton December 7, 2015 at 10:30 AM Thanks so much for your thoughtful comments

Richard Lamoureux December 5, 2015 at 3:35 PM Vey well expressed! Congrats. John Hamilton December 5, 2015 at 4:51 PM Thanks Richard nice for you to visit and comment, very much appreciated.

Sandra Haight December 4, 2015 at 2:00 PM Very beautifully written, John, and so deserving of your First Place win. Congratulations to you! Sandra John Hamilton December 4, 2015 at 3:32 PM Thanks you Sandra, coming from you an accomplished poet, is an honor.John

Sarita Milliner December 4, 2015 at 11:23 AM Wow!! Very nice write!! Congrats!! John Hamilton December 4, 2015 at 3:31 PM Thanks Sarita for your visit and kind comment.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores December 4, 2015 at 6:02 AM Congratulations on the placement of the contest John. John Hamilton December 4, 2015 at 6:59 AM Thanks Nayda.

Dan Cwiak December 4, 2015 at 1:24 AM Wonderful write in this form, John. Congrats on your win. John Hamilton December 4, 2015 at 6:58 AM Thanks a lot Dan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 3, 2015 at 10:36 PM Ah John such a beauty.. heartfelt write.. congrats on top podium! John Hamilton December 3, 2015 at 11:02 PM Thanks DR always appreciate your words of encouragement.

Connie Marcum Wong December 3, 2015 at 7:46 PM Oh John....I Love, love, love this wonderful poem!! Straight into my fave's file it goes. Congratulations on your most deserving top win. You touched my soul with your words. Certainly a #7. Blessings, Connie John Hamilton December 3, 2015 at 10:02 PM Wow! I am shocked, by your complimentary words, thank you so much for liking it. Sometimes it just feels right coming out right? You know it, you are very talented. Thanks again

Alexis Y. December 3, 2015 at 6:52 PM John, congratulations on your 1st place win:-) Alexis John Hamilton December 3, 2015 at 9:59 PM Thanks Alexis.

Lin Lane December 3, 2015 at 6:29 PM well done, John John Hamilton December 3, 2015 at 9:57 PM Thanks Lin always appreciated.John

Eve Roper December 3, 2015 at 5:59 PM Congratulations on your win! Beautiful write! John Hamilton December 3, 2015 at 9:56 PM Thanks Eve always appreciate your support.

Jan Allison December 3, 2015 at 5:22 PM Dropping back with my congrats John:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A December 3, 2015 at 5:14 PM John, Congratulations on your Quoting Rumi Win. SKAT ** Love John Hamilton December 3, 2015 at 9:54 PM Thanks Skat you are so kind. John

Beautiful Scars November 26, 2015 at 6:35 PM Wonderful John! I love where you took this poem, gl in the contest! :)-lu *smiles* John Hamilton November 27, 2015 at 9:39 AM Thanks Laura for your positive feedback, and visits. Have a great day. JDH

Jan Allison November 26, 2015 at 12:27 PM beautifully penned acrostic good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx John Hamilton November 26, 2015 at 3:24 PM Thanks Jan felt good as it flowed. Thanks for your kind visit. JDH