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No Goodbye Was Said

No goodbye was said Vanishing from the eyes of lovers No trail left a hint of where No clue hidden to unlock why Just gone unbeknownst Blue tears escaping to their unknown fate Aching hearts swell with love for you Where might you be Let be known you are missed Did you know No goodbye was said Smile Akkina R Downing 6-1-17

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/18/2018 2:12:00 PM

A beautiful and emotional poem, Akkina. How sad it is when one 'disappears' and no goodbyes are said! ~ Smiles & Hugs // paul

Silent One

Date: 12/25/2017 10:49:00 AM

This is sad and I can relate to it...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/9/2017 10:24:00 PM

A very melancholy poem expressed well w/deep emotion, Akkina. It does leave a hole in the heart when things shake out that way. Sad, yet beautiful yearnings this poem be. Love and smiles always.

Akkina Downing
Date: 12/10/2017 7:13:00 AM

It was tough but life goes on, I guess. Thank you my dear friend... Hugs and smiles and loves :)

Edward Mccall

Date: 8/28/2017 10:35:00 PM

Hi Kina I can't believe I missed this one. It definitely hurts when someone leaves without saying goodbye. You captured that emotion so beautifully in this poem it is definitely going into my favorites. Have a blessed evening my dear friend.

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/29/2017 5:32:00 AM

It sure does. I think it hurts more when you think they your friend and while they don't they the same for you. Funny sad. Lol!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/5/2017 10:21:00 PM

Hi Akkina, a sad and beautiful emotional write. Heartfelt :)

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/19/2017 9:13:00 PM

Thank yo so much Susan :) I apologize for this late reply, I just saw your comment now. Hugs and smile my dear friend :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 8/4/2017 3:46:00 PM

Hi Akkina , I could not imagine a loved one going missing , powerful write , have a lovely weekend my friend ::)))) hugs

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/4/2017 3:53:00 PM

Hello Niall, yeah I know. It's sad! And may you have a fabulous weekend my dear friend. Hugs :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/5/2017 1:29:00 PM

So touching and quite sadly beautiful. Such deeppain felt when one loses a true love and no goodbye was offered. Just a vanishing.. A gem my friend. A fav..

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/5/2017 3:33:00 PM

Thank you so much Rob I really appreciate it. It means a lot. Hugs :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 6/21/2017 8:20:00 AM

You capture emotions well in this sad tale.

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/5/2017 3:33:00 PM

Thank you so much Scott :)

Funom Makama

Date: 6/17/2017 10:05:00 AM

Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.

Akkina Downing
Date: 6/17/2017 6:21:00 PM

Hello Funom, how are you? Thanks for the lovely visit and comment, I appreciate it very much... hugs :)