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No Frowning

Boss to new stripper You look good, but please don't frown ~ Grin when you bare it

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Date: 4/23/2020 9:29:00 AM
You. Have successfully concealed a Limerick within a Senryu. Great job
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/23/2020 2:44:00 PM
And you are the one who spotted it! Thanks for your perceptive comment, John! Take care, Gershon
Date: 4/22/2020 3:40:00 PM
Ba-Ding! (rim shot)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/22/2020 4:10:00 PM
Three points. :) gw
Date: 4/22/2020 1:31:00 PM
L * O * L ;D,
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/22/2020 4:09:00 PM
T * Y * S * M!

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