No Feminine Tease......Please!

I'm ensnared in cobwebs crocheted with time,
Prostrate on wild moss,lies my woman sublime;
Stupored with cannabis and some weed looks like slime:
Life seems in darkness,unfit for the swine;
Her eyes prismatic hues,are the enchanting clues;
These senses lie floating,on a pool of red wine.
Those bewitching lips wear a venetian look,
Got to savour them hook or by crook.
Contours of fullness one of a kind,
Inviting enough,to drive a hawk blind.
Behind the moons glow,stars hide courting in shadow;
Playing peeping Tom,Helios is waiting for morrow.
My desires in distress,this mind in a mess;
Oh beloved you've left me, without a caress.
A new dawn is breaking,another cocks waking:
With conciousness dawning,I'll surely wake shaking.
This terrible tease,had me truly stirred and mistaken,
Once in a while I guess,a mans got to be shaken.


                                             --- Princefreakasso
                                                 {Artist and Poet}

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 9/25/2009 8:39:00 PM
You Know Some ' 10 ' Rated Ladies, huh Prince... Very Nicely Put... As my brother and friends used to say: No Tease and and No Fleas, Please (smile) You Express Yourself Beautifully MoonBee
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Date: 9/25/2009 6:31:00 AM
~~~Sensational~~~ Prince~~~ love this piece. Thank you. Thank you also for your kind comments.Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:56:00 PM
Colorful, man. I like.
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:57:00 PM
Hi Prince It's nice to meet you.This is a beautifully well penned. Your sentiments for your love are very touching. Well, you know what they say, patience is a virtue, here's hoping she comes back to you soon if this is real to life, if not then you have matered the art of putting yourself into hearts longing for more. Look forward to reading more of your amazing poetry.Thanks for your most welcome comments on my poem Journey.Take care, many blessings to you and yours.Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:52:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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