No Explain

Fear causing visceral strain
nausea rises like the moon,
full and vain;
not enough……..
never enough……..
greed without end……….

What more is there to gain?

Choking on the tension,
the pleasers refrain.
Gagging on the longing
the loneliness,
the pain.

No excuse.
No explain.

Rest awhile these aged bones…
in the space between
between one breath and the next
meditation is the thing.

Just breathe and 
loose the vise again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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George   Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 3:22 AM
Cogratulations on your win in John's contest, Deb. Love, Lainie
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations Deb on your well deserved win in John Heck's contest "Edge". Love, Carol
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 7:16 PM
Conratulations on your win Debbie. Your poem expresses how many of us feel and it is excellent!
Winter Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 6:43 AM
wow. sure can relate to this most excellent write. congrats my sweet, and thank you for your thoughtful congrats and comment on my win. means an awful lot to me. hugs, shar xoxo
Brumley Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 7:12 PM
Ah! For flesh abates, and then sighs, and thus secretly elates along with soul to die! a little ditty from my poem 'Here Comes Death Inquiring" Congrats on your Hm in the Edge contest Deborah.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 3:01 PM
Congrats Debbie on your HM in John's Edge contest with this marvelous creation... enjoy your wonderful honor TEACH... with luv..pupil in LUV...
Guzzi Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 2:42 PM
sometimes one just needs a vent like steam from a radiator!
Ball Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 8:57 AM
Thank you for the kind words and of course you are a great poet in your own right, God bless you and yours always, Robert A. Ball
Goff Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 5:41 AM
introspective, freeing...jim
Culverhouse Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 11:04 AM
put some heat on those bones, sounds painful!! nicely writtten.
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 10:26 AM
Nice play on words. Sad. Keep writing. Sara
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