No Escape From Reality

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My life changed, a killer the sec I placed a gun to his head and pulled the trigger. Eyes wide open in horror then swallowed with a last breath his eyes grew dark, now dead. A black hole opened underneath my feet and in the moment I felt the darkness. My short-lived life, I sank to the floor stumbling over what I have thrown away. I had to hold my breath and watch unfold tears flooding mama's eyes, “Please not my boy." Certainly you understand my time has come I cannot remember all the details. He is dead. Is that not the only thing that matters and now, we must carry on? 8/6/2017 For Silent One's Iconic Songs Inspired by the music of; Queen – Bohemian Rhapsody https://genius.com/Queen-bohemian-rhapsody

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Silent One

Date: 9/4/2017 8:51:00 AM

This is very similar to how I look at this song, this part of the song is very strong and you have complimented it very well.. congratulations on your placement..

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/7/2017 4:26:00 AM

Wow, what an incredible write my friend! You have interpreted this song very nicely, and have written an amazing poem from the segments of the song! What a beautiful piece, Great Work!!