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Late is the night pulling a trailer we are tired tonight a day spent riding dirt bikes our headlights failed we had to stop it was dark we called out for help hoping someone would hear there was no echo, no noise it was quite spooky there were no stars, no moon the sky was black we would call out again there was no echo, no noise but it would sprinkle and stop we had no flashlight no bars on the cell phone we understood that darkness was the absence of light we decided to not move dare to go anywhere the night was spent in the car morning begins to arrive we see that the road stops with the light of the morning we decided to head home Edward J Ebbs - 03/22/205

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Date: 4/16/2025 1:58:00 PM
God bless you, Ed, on your flight back to heaven. So sorry to hear you have left us.
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