Larry Berdoo Poet Narrative

No Dreams Tonight

Can't sleep, deep in thoughts,
keeping beat with the clock.
Looking threw mini blinds.
Olive tree branches, draping
down; I'm envyous, they seem
relaxed. I see the moon between
the leaves. No barking dogs,
just stillness. Quiet moments,
calming down. Keeping thoughts,
down to a roar;--- good night all.


03/11/14   written by,  Larry Berdoo
                         WRITE ON!

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Laura Cole March 29, 2014 at 5:23 AM So very lovely Larry. :-) Larry Berdoo March 29, 2014 at 8:53 AM Thanks Laura, As long as it touches your heart, that gives me a smile.

Barbara Gorelick March 26, 2014 at 3:21 PM Good night Larry, from an insomniac...lol. I do like your poems. BG Larry Berdoo March 29, 2014 at 8:51 AM Thank you Barbara, I Share your taste. Serious, as long as I leave you with a smile. Larry Berdoo March 26, 2014 at 4:02 PM Sleeping better these nights. I'm glad you like it. Thank you Barbara.

Brian Cooper March 14, 2014 at 5:49 AM Although I miss sleep sometimes, I find great solace that the sane are in their beds sleeping not keeping me awake. ha ha ha, Brian Brian Cooper March 14, 2014 at 6:22 AM Thank you for the kind compliment. Please chesk out the Senryu I just wrote to go with the quote! Respectfully, Brian Larry Berdoo March 14, 2014 at 5:58 AM I yet to meet a perfect man. You have talent; dwell on that!~~~~WRITE ON!~~~Thanks for stopping by.

Honestly J.T. March 14, 2014 at 12:26 AM I too lie awake at night, at times. Good poems Larry Berdoo March 14, 2014 at 5:35 AM Ya, This is a common problem, with us who write. At the same time thoughts need to captured and put on paper ASAP. Words are the esence from our souls. Thanks for stopping by.~~~Honestly JT

Sharon Mason March 12, 2014 at 6:56 PM THANKS FOR THE VISIT. YOU ARE VERY FUNNY. HA, HA, HA. Larry Berdoo March 12, 2014 at 7:03 PM I thought I heard someone laughing?----Thanks Sharon, keep smiling.

Sara Kendrick March 12, 2014 at 6:10 PM Welcome to soup..Great encouraging work that you have penned..Thanks for the visit to my page..I hope that my grandsons will be able to have something to remember of granny's and pawpaw's home..Sara Larry Berdoo March 12, 2014 at 6:36 PM Thank you, Mrs. Kendrick, there is no doubt in my mind; this little guy will ever forget his loving granny, and pawpaw! When he comes up to you and looks at you and say's granny, can I have a cookie? Stop; look into his eyes, pause,--- your etched in his mind, forever more! No money can match that love.

Joseph May March 12, 2014 at 5:25 PM A wonderful write Larry...best wishes Larry Berdoo March 14, 2014 at 6:05 AM Thanks for your comments.~~~~WRITE ON!~~~Joesph

Anne-Lise Andresen March 11, 2014 at 1:31 PM - A great and touching poem from you Larry! - well written :) - A pleasure to read. - Good night :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Larry Berdoo March 11, 2014 at 2:23 PM Thank you Ann, for stopping by.