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No Dreams Tonight

Can't sleep, deep in thoughts, keeping beat with the clock. Looking threw mini blinds. Olive tree branches, draping down; I'm envyous, they seem relaxed. I see the moon between the leaves. No barking dogs, just stillness. Quiet moments, calming down. Keeping thoughts, down to a roar;--- good night all. 03/11/14 written by, Larry Berdoo WRITE ON!

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Date: 3/29/2014 5:23:00 AM
So very lovely Larry. :-)
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Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/29/2014 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Laura, As long as it touches your heart, that gives me a smile.
Date: 3/26/2014 3:21:00 PM
Good night Larry, from an insomniac...lol. I do like your poems. BG
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Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/29/2014 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Barbara, I Share your taste. Serious, as long as I leave you with a smile.
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Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/26/2014 4:02:00 PM
Sleeping better these nights. I'm glad you like it. Thank you Barbara.
Date: 3/14/2014 5:49:00 AM
Although I miss sleep sometimes, I find great solace that the sane are in their beds sleeping not keeping me awake. ha ha ha, Brian
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Brian Cooper
Date: 3/14/2014 6:22:00 AM
Thank you for the kind compliment. Please chesk out the Senryu I just wrote to go with the quote! Respectfully, Brian
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Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/14/2014 5:58:00 AM
I yet to meet a perfect man. You have talent; dwell on that!~~~~WRITE ON!~~~Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 3/14/2014 12:26:00 AM
I too lie awake at night, at times. Good poems
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Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/14/2014 5:35:00 AM
Ya, This is a common problem, with us who write. At the same time thoughts need to captured and put on paper ASAP. Words are the esence from our souls. Thanks for stopping by.~~~Honestly JT
Date: 3/12/2014 6:56:00 PM
THANKS FOR THE VISIT. YOU ARE VERY FUNNY. HA, HA, HA.
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Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/12/2014 7:03:00 PM
I thought I heard someone laughing?----Thanks Sharon, keep smiling.
Date: 3/12/2014 6:10:00 PM
Welcome to soup..Great encouraging work that you have penned..Thanks for the visit to my page..I hope that my grandsons will be able to have something to remember of granny's and pawpaw's home..Sara
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Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/12/2014 6:36:00 PM
Thank you, Mrs. Kendrick, there is no doubt in my mind; this little guy will ever forget his loving granny, and pawpaw! When he comes up to you and looks at you and say's granny, can I have a cookie? Stop; look into his eyes, pause,--- your etched in his mind, forever more! No money can match that love.
Date: 3/12/2014 5:25:00 PM
A wonderful write Larry...best wishes
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Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/14/2014 6:05:00 AM
Thanks for your comments.~~~~WRITE ON!~~~Joesph
Date: 3/11/2014 1:31:00 PM
- A great and touching poem from you Larry! - well written :) - A pleasure to read. - Good night :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Larry Berdoo
Date: 3/11/2014 2:23:00 PM
Thank you Ann, for stopping by.