No Comparison

What can I compare you to?
A sunset across the lake,
An eagle soaring to incredible heights,
A majestic snow capped mountain
Comparison is not limited if you can imagine,
Everything beautiful combined together
Everything good condensed to one entity
Every feeling magnified to the highest intensity
Whom can I compare you to?
Certainly not to any ordinary person
Certainly not to any one person
Certainly not to any human being
Who are you?
The light that shines in the dark
The essence of life itself
My Lord, my Savior, my Everything
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 9, 2010 at 3:58 AM
"the light the shines in the dark" a sunset, an eagle, a snow capped mountain, everything beautiful, just like these words, magnificent, the Lord has put a pen within your hand, has given you a gift~ thanks for commenting on my poetry~~
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July 18, 2009 at 5:25 PM
Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational view with us. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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July 17, 2009 at 4:34 PM
This is a good one about the man upstairs and well deserved to be featured.
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July 17, 2009 at 12:38 PM
I knew to expect this ending! Beautiful flow and great message.
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July 16, 2009 at 6:07 AM
Beautiful writing,Karla. Keep on writing. Sara
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July 14, 2009 at 2:06 PM
Karia, congrats on your feature...Raul
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July 13, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Congratulations dear Karla on your poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
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July 13, 2009 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations on this poetry being displayed. More power and God bless. Ernilando
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July 12, 2009 at 10:53 PM
Our God is incomparable, unsearcheable & unpredictable. Thanks for doing this for the most high! Wow, Great flow of words, this is a very passionate piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke
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