Tahera Mannan Poet Free verse

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Early quiet morning
Poems after refreshing poem
When I chanced upon
A pot of gold
Verse one was about love
This brought a quiet smile
The mention of the Phoenix
Confused me further
Feeling the deep thought 
Of the poet was impossible
The ‘tired legs’
And ‘the souvenirs’
Confusing me more and more
But the end was tremendous
Though ‘no comments’
I left being unsure

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Sara Kendrick October 15, 2010 at 2:30 PM Just say I really don't know what you are meaning here..Enjoyed your work..Good luck in the contest.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Nate D. October 15, 2010 at 10:48 AM hum! interesting to the certainty of thoughts. Nice poem! keep them rolling' luv n.d.

Skat A October 14, 2010 at 5:59 PM Hi, Tahera~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~ Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read many poems, before my crazy KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you poets. Have a wonderful night*luv~SKAT"

Barbara Gorelick October 14, 2010 at 7:11 AM Hes going to like this one I think..well done. BG

Dr.Ram Mehta October 14, 2010 at 5:56 AM Very nice entry good luck, tahera

Francine Roberts October 13, 2010 at 9:56 PM great entry for the contest, I am not having much luck coming up with anything for this one, so far I've finished two and they both are lousy enough to deserve"no comment" I wish you success with this , I'm sure it is exactly what he was looking for