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Early quiet morning
Poems after refreshing poem
When I chanced upon
A pot of gold
Verse one was about love
This brought a quiet smile
The mention of the Phoenix
Confused me further
Feeling the deep thought
Of the poet was impossible
The ‘tired legs’
And ‘the souvenirs’
Confusing me more and more
But the end was tremendous
Though ‘no comments’
I left being unsure
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