No Cares

Fight with me, argue with me

I don’t care anymore

Scold me, threaten me,

It doesn’t matter anymore,

Praise me, Forgive me,

I never asked for that,

Forget me, Leave me,

Let’s stay with that,

Bug me, annoy me

Leave me alone,

Ignore me, talk to me,

Leave me alone,

Laugh at me, laugh with me,

I don’t care,

Stay with me as I drift away,

Or leave me to disappear,

Once your gone, I regret my words,

I never wanted you to leave,

To watch me sink, to be alone,

Watch you hurt, hurts even me,

The fights, the anger, The sad and sorrow,

The laughter, The smiles, the cries, the tears,

It all means nothing, but yet so much,

So forgive me, Praise me,

I do appreciate you,

Talk to me, sing to me,

Which ever you want to do,

Stay with me as I drift away,

For if you do I’ll do the same,

Laugh at me, Laugh with me,

Whichever the case I’ll join along,

The way you smile lifts my spirit,

If you’re to leave, I cannot stay strong,

For you’re my life, my breath, my savior,

The way I walk, The way you move,

If you are gone, I am too,

You just stay, go no where soon,

So no more cares, yet still so many,

The lights been out for oh so long,

With one strike of a match the room ignites, with the light I do remember,

The feeling of love, the feeling of freedom,

No more fights, no more cries, no more smiles, no more tears,

With all these gone

And no one here

Looks like I have

No More Cares.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/21/2012 11:59:00 AM
A moving write, Amy. Perhaps "No More Cares", but still this has certainly given your heart a jolt. Seems to be a peaceful surrender. God bless you and yours! Mikki
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Date: 5/5/2011 4:01:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2011 7:47:00 PM
so are you saying you like it? other than that i see what you mean (kinda)i wrote this a bit ago, back when my mother had cancer. she was suppose to not make it. Basically it starts out with how our liveswere, and then nothing matters anymore, all we care for is for you to make it. We had fought alot, and when it says 'once your gone i regret my words' it was then i realized that nothing else matters, and i am sorry for all that has happened in the past.... o let me know if you like it or not :)
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Date: 5/4/2011 6:29:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I agree with P.D. It is recoming imune to our sensitivity toward others feelings. In old time you bump into someoneand both parties are begging for forgivenes. now it who had the bigger gun.
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Date: 5/4/2011 4:49:00 PM
Amy, change in the future,,, is what helps us not care no more... I think the more we live the more we understand that life should come worries free.. no matter where your at... enjoyed,..p.d.
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