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No Bones About It

My bones are old, so I’ve been told; It’s osteoporosis. Accepting that if I go splat I’m done – that’s the prognosis. So when it’s cold, I’m not so bold To walk if streets are icy. One little slip may crack my hip; To chance it might be dicey. And so today, I had to weigh Conditions ‘fore my journey Or I’d go whoosh, land on my tush And end up on a gurney. My normal route I was astute Enough to see could trip me So I took stock and ‘round the block I walked and I was slip-free. When I was young, I must have clung To thoughts of never aging But now, alas, I watch my ass And every step I’m gauging.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 1/11/2022 6:54:00 AM
Winter is a time for extra caution, whether driving or walking. When roads are slicked with ice I stay put. Even negotiating my feet to the dumpster I put off for a day or two – I'll tolerate the odor. / Maurice
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Date: 1/7/2022 4:36:00 AM
LOL...I absolutely adore this cute poem, Ilene. Just please be careful. Happy New Year my friend. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 1/6/2022 10:06:00 PM
I am gingerly walking across ice every morning and evening to get to my car, to get back to my house, to feed a cat, and to get to my art studio. It is bitterly cold here and icy. This poem reminded me to be careful. I do not need to break anything else!
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Date: 1/6/2022 10:15:00 AM
This should be published on the cover of AARP! Well thought and done - especially Verse 3! Aloha!
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Date: 1/5/2022 8:25:00 PM
A pleasure to read. I hate that you have osteoporosis, though… :)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/6/2022 2:53:00 AM
Thank you for your comment and your concern. If this is the worst that happens to me, I’ll take it gladly!
Date: 1/5/2022 5:27:00 PM
Love the ending, which left me wondering how you get the 'a word' past the censors. Perhaps a new era has dawned?! Cheers, Gershon
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/6/2022 2:47:00 AM
I think sometimes they just don’t notice. I’ve had other similar words replaced by asterisks. It always annoys me when that happens…
Date: 1/5/2022 3:05:00 PM
Your poems are always a pleasure to read, Ilene. You write smoothly and effortlessly. ~ Alas, old age is unforgiving! but in spite of that we still have to make the most of it :) // paul
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/6/2022 2:49:00 AM
Thank you, Paul! I still walk 3 miles a day but just make sure I avoid anyplace I could slip and fall…
Date: 1/5/2022 2:49:00 PM
We all cling to the thoughts of never aging! An ocean turtle lives up to 150 years or more! great that you see No Bones About It ! beautiful rhyming! thanks.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/6/2022 2:50:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment! Not sure that I’d want to stick around for 150 years, though…
Date: 1/5/2022 2:29:00 PM
My aunt and mum both have osteoporosis as did my dad so I too am careful as I guess I am at risk of it , fab rhyme as ever Ilene:-) hugs jan x
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 1/6/2022 2:52:00 AM
Hey Jan! If not for a bone density test, I’d never know I have it. I only think of it when there may be some ice around…

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