No Bones About It

My bones are old, so I’ve been told;
It’s osteoporosis.
Accepting that if I go splat
I’m done – that’s the prognosis.

So when it’s cold, I’m not so bold
To walk if streets are icy.
One little slip may crack my hip;
To chance it might be dicey.

And so today, I had to weigh
Conditions ‘fore my journey
Or I’d go whoosh, land on my tush
And end up on a gurney.

My normal route I was astute
Enough to see could trip me
So I took stock and ‘round the block
I walked and I was slip-free.

When I was young, I must have clung
To thoughts of never aging
But now, alas, I watch my ass
And every step I’m gauging.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rigoler Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 6:54 AM
Winter is a time for extra caution, whether driving or walking. When roads are slicked with ice I stay put. Even negotiating my feet to the dumpster I put off for a day or two – I'll tolerate the odor. / Maurice
Messina Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 4:36 AM
LOL...I absolutely adore this cute poem, Ilene. Just please be careful. Happy New Year my friend. Hugs Charlie
Krutsinger Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 10:06 PM
I am gingerly walking across ice every morning and evening to get to my car, to get back to my house, to feed a cat, and to get to my art studio. It is bitterly cold here and icy. This poem reminded me to be careful. I do not need to break anything else!
Leffanta Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 10:15 AM
This should be published on the cover of AARP! Well thought and done - especially Verse 3! Aloha!
Awtry Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 8:25 PM
A pleasure to read. I hate that you have osteoporosis, though… :)
Bauer Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 2:53 AM
Thank you for your comment and your concern. If this is the worst that happens to me, I’ll take it gladly!
Wolf Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 5:27 PM
Love the ending, which left me wondering how you get the 'a word' past the censors. Perhaps a new era has dawned?! Cheers, Gershon
Bauer Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 2:47 AM
I think sometimes they just don’t notice. I’ve had other similar words replaced by asterisks. It always annoys me when that happens…
Callus Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 3:05 PM
Your poems are always a pleasure to read, Ilene. You write smoothly and effortlessly. ~ Alas, old age is unforgiving! but in spite of that we still have to make the most of it :) // paul
Bauer Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 2:49 AM
Thank you, Paul! I still walk 3 miles a day but just make sure I avoid anyplace I could slip and fall…
Ahmed Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 2:49 PM
We all cling to the thoughts of never aging! An ocean turtle lives up to 150 years or more! great that you see No Bones About It ! beautiful rhyming! thanks.
Bauer Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 2:50 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment! Not sure that I’d want to stick around for 150 years, though…
Allison Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 2:29 PM
My aunt and mum both have osteoporosis as did my dad so I too am careful as I guess I am at risk of it , fab rhyme as ever Ilene:-) hugs jan x
Bauer Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 2:52 AM
Hey Jan! If not for a bone density test, I’d never know I have it. I only think of it when there may be some ice around…
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