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No Blame No Shame

lack of impression
          may belie lone depression 
               use ones discretion 
            with gentle intercession 
        love hope and kind expression


QUIN-TO your five line Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand 21/11/2020
               Hororable mention

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Susan Ashley Date: 11/27/2020 6:41:00 PM Beautiful rhymes throughout, even in the title, David. Wonderful emotions flow from your gifted pen. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/28/2020 1:33:00 AM Thank you so much Susan for that uplifting comment, high praise coming from a talent like yourself, cheers David

Constance La France Date: 11/23/2020 11:34:00 AM David, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderful write _Constance Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/23/2020 1:07:00 PM Thank you so much Constance, delighted you dropped in cheers David

Sam Kauffman Date: 11/22/2020 10:40:00 AM A lovely and heartfelt poem, David. Nice monorhyme! Sending you congratulations! Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/22/2020 10:58:00 AM Thank you so much Sam for that lovely comment, I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/22/2020 7:57:00 AM Great rhyming. Congrats on your winner. Sara Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/22/2020 8:19:00 AM Thank you Sara, an honorable mention so much better than detention, today I was paying attention, cheers David

Caren Krutsinger Date: 11/21/2020 4:55:00 PM Good luck in the contest. Rhyming is impeccable. Login to Reply David Kavanagh Date: 11/21/2020 7:54:00 PM Thanks Caren, honestly don’t know how you find the time to look in but delighted you did cheers David