David Kavanagh Poet Tanka

No Blame No Shame

lack of impression
          may belie lone depression 
               use ones discretion 
            with gentle intercession 
        love hope and kind expression


QUIN-TO your five line Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand 21/11/2020
               Hororable mention

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Susan Ashley November 27, 2020 at 6:41 PM Beautiful rhymes throughout, even in the title, David. Wonderful emotions flow from your gifted pen. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest.. ~Susan David Kavanagh November 28, 2020 at 1:33 AM Thank you so much Susan for that uplifting comment, high praise coming from a talent like yourself, cheers David

Constance La France November 23, 2020 at 11:34 AM David, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderful write _Constance David Kavanagh November 23, 2020 at 1:07 PM Thank you so much Constance, delighted you dropped in cheers David

Sam Kauffman November 22, 2020 at 10:40 AM A lovely and heartfelt poem, David. Nice monorhyme! Sending you congratulations! David Kavanagh November 22, 2020 at 10:58 AM Thank you so much Sam for that lovely comment, I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

Sara Kendrick November 22, 2020 at 7:57 AM Great rhyming. Congrats on your winner. Sara David Kavanagh November 22, 2020 at 8:19 AM Thank you Sara, an honorable mention so much better than detention, today I was paying attention, cheers David

Caren Krutsinger November 21, 2020 at 4:55 PM Good luck in the contest. Rhyming is impeccable. David Kavanagh November 21, 2020 at 7:54 PM Thanks Caren, honestly don’t know how you find the time to look in but delighted you did cheers David