Sam Kauffman Poet Rhyme

No Adjectives

No Adjectives
  
No adjectives graced skies of dawn
No crimson, mauve or bronze
Only blankets of fog akin to gloom
Blocking sunlight, singing runes.

Winds on gusts rose up in westerlies
Breath like brooms sweep skies majestically
Danced as a smile – heaven cheering -
Mischief on wings – imps twirl in clearings

6-14-21
Contest: Adjectives Deleted
Sponsor: Jack Webster

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Kim Merryman August 11, 2021 at 3:14 PM I enjoyed reading your poem, Sam! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex August 10, 2021 at 3:55 AM Beautiful work on Adjectived deleted. Congratulations on your win!

Paula Goldsmith July 13, 2021 at 1:37 PM Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. So much fun. Have a blessed day writing away............

Rama Balasubramanian July 12, 2021 at 7:13 PM Great imagery. Congratulations on your well win

Eve Roper July 12, 2021 at 7:13 AM I do love your verse, Sam, well done. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Christuraj Alex July 12, 2021 at 3:34 AM Beautiful creation. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2021 at 5:20 PM such beautiful imagery!! truly . I love this.

Jennifer Proxenos June 18, 2021 at 12:01 PM This is very clever and creative Sam and needs to win! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Sam Kauffman June 22, 2021 at 9:05 AM Hi Jennifer! Thank you. Your words just warmed my heart and brought a smile to my face! I am hoping it does well. Sending you bunches of colorful blessings and hugs!

Paul Callus June 18, 2021 at 3:05 AM Life without adjectives and colours tends to appear rather dreary, Sam, but you cleverly managed to stay out of trouble :) ~ Best regards // paul Sam Kauffman June 22, 2021 at 9:02 AM You are so right Paul. Thank you for your perceptive message and gracious words of compliment. So appreciated! Hope you are well with days full of colorful blessings!

Ken Rone June 16, 2021 at 11:31 AM Sam - This is clever and it works. Good luck in the contest - Ken Sam Kauffman June 22, 2021 at 9:00 AM Thank you so much Ken. Our cloudy summer mornings so like cloudy northwest skies, got me to thinking about the drabness of the sky without adjectives and how we northwesterners appreciate color - especially blue! Thank you for your good wishes. All the best!

Michelle Faulkner June 15, 2021 at 2:46 PM I really like the metaphor of a bleak sky without adjectives, so clever! Should do well in the contest! Sam Kauffman June 22, 2021 at 8:54 AM Hi Michelle! This was a real challenge. Made me realize how important adjectives can be. And also got me to thinking about using more poetic devices like metaphor and simile. So appreciate your feedback. Thank you for your always encouraging words! Hope you well. Sending you blessings of colorful adjectioves my friend.

L Milton Hankins June 15, 2021 at 10:28 AM Fantastically lovely, Sam. Such a nice job, I wish you well in the contest. Sam Kauffman June 15, 2021 at 11:35 AM Thank you so much Milt. Had fun with this contest. In the morning we often get fog drifting in from the ocean. Thought it might be a good subject for the contest! So appreciate your message and good wishes! All the best.

Rama Balasubramanian June 15, 2021 at 10:06 AM Wonderful entry for the contest. All the best! Sam Kauffman June 15, 2021 at 11:37 AM Hi Rama! Thank you! This was such a fun challenge! All the best to you