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No Adjectives

No Adjectives No adjectives graced skies of dawn No crimson, mauve or bronze Only blankets of fog akin to gloom Blocking sunlight, singing runes. Winds on gusts rose up in westerlies Breath like brooms sweep skies majestically Danced as a smile – heaven cheering - Mischief on wings – imps twirl in clearings 6-14-21 Contest: Adjectives Deleted Sponsor: Jack Webster

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Kim Merryman

Date: 8/11/2021 3:14:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poem, Sam! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/10/2021 3:55:00 AM

Beautiful work on Adjectived deleted. Congratulations on your win!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/13/2021 1:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. So much fun. Have a blessed day writing away............

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/12/2021 7:13:00 PM

Great imagery. Congratulations on your well win

Eve Roper

Date: 7/12/2021 7:13:00 AM

I do love your verse, Sam, well done. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/12/2021 3:34:00 AM

Beautiful creation. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/24/2021 5:20:00 PM

such beautiful imagery!! truly . I love this.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/18/2021 12:01:00 PM

This is very clever and creative Sam and needs to win! Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/22/2021 9:05:00 AM

Hi Jennifer! Thank you. Your words just warmed my heart and brought a smile to my face! I am hoping it does well. Sending you bunches of colorful blessings and hugs!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/18/2021 3:05:00 AM

Life without adjectives and colours tends to appear rather dreary, Sam, but you cleverly managed to stay out of trouble :) ~ Best regards // paul

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/22/2021 9:02:00 AM

You are so right Paul. Thank you for your perceptive message and gracious words of compliment. So appreciated! Hope you are well with days full of colorful blessings!

Ken Rone

Date: 6/16/2021 11:31:00 AM

Sam - This is clever and it works. Good luck in the contest - Ken

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/22/2021 9:00:00 AM

Thank you so much Ken. Our cloudy summer mornings so like cloudy northwest skies, got me to thinking about the drabness of the sky without adjectives and how we northwesterners appreciate color - especially blue! Thank you for your good wishes. All the best!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/15/2021 2:46:00 PM

I really like the metaphor of a bleak sky without adjectives, so clever! Should do well in the contest!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/22/2021 8:54:00 AM

Hi Michelle! This was a real challenge. Made me realize how important adjectives can be. And also got me to thinking about using more poetic devices like metaphor and simile. So appreciate your feedback. Thank you for your always encouraging words! Hope you well. Sending you blessings of colorful adjectioves my friend.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/15/2021 10:28:00 AM

Fantastically lovely, Sam. Such a nice job, I wish you well in the contest.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/15/2021 11:35:00 AM

Thank you so much Milt. Had fun with this contest. In the morning we often get fog drifting in from the ocean. Thought it might be a good subject for the contest! So appreciate your message and good wishes! All the best.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 6/15/2021 10:06:00 AM

Wonderful entry for the contest. All the best!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/15/2021 11:37:00 AM

Hi Rama! Thank you! This was such a fun challenge! All the best to you