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No Accounts

A good Bank keeps things balanced - that's key But, one thing that sure gets to me Their counting ain't right with five windows in sight It's only two tellers, I see!

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David Smalling

Date: 12/9/2010 4:09:00 AM

A good poet is great observer, and a great observer is a great critic ... and poetry is the palace where they all live. Well done, you have occupancy.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/12/2010 1:17:00 PM

Right on, Ralph!! (Or should I say write on?) I doubt these banks are ever fully staffed. It's the same way in supermarkets. Dozens of checkout counters, but only a couple are open. Thanks for sharing your humor with us! Love, Carolyn

Kim Hilliker

Date: 11/7/2010 11:36:00 AM

lol. You are so right on with this Limerick. :-) Thanks for sharing.

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 11/5/2010 8:09:00 AM

Isn't that the truth! Wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Larry Belt

Date: 11/4/2010 6:58:00 PM

lol That's why I use my mattress my friend.....Larry

John Loving Iii

Date: 11/4/2010 9:18:00 AM

sounds like a personal problem to me. john

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/3/2010 12:04:00 PM

More and more businesses downsizing Ralph .. but your poem is true and upbeat today and if for the contest.. good luck my friend.. luv your title.. no one seems to be giving much of an account anywhere ... enjoyed with luv..

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 11/3/2010 9:45:00 AM

Hi Ralph. It's the same everywhere!And it always seems to be the queue that I join that they decide to close, just as I'm nearly there!You've got it absolutely spot on with your limerick.Very good and fun.Thanx Luv June(sylvia)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/3/2010 9:33:00 AM

That is the everyday scene opne experiences in the present situations, Ralph. Quite witty