No Accounts

A good Bank keeps things balanced - that's key

But, one thing that sure gets to me

        Their counting ain't right

        with five windows in sight

It's only two tellers, I see!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smalling Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 4:09 AM
A good poet is great observer, and a great observer is a great critic ... and poetry is the palace where they all live. Well done, you have occupancy.
Devonshire Avatar
November 12, 2010 at 1:17 PM
Right on, Ralph!! (Or should I say write on?) I doubt these banks are ever fully staffed. It's the same way in supermarkets. Dozens of checkout counters, but only a couple are open. Thanks for sharing your humor with us! Love, Carolyn
Hilliker Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 11:36 AM
lol. You are so right on with this Limerick. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Muzzey Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 8:09 AM
Isn't that the truth! Wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Belt Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 6:58 PM
lol That's why I use my mattress my friend.....Larry
Loving Iii Avatar
November 4, 2010 at 9:18 AM
sounds like a personal problem to me. john
Sweetheart Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 12:04 PM
More and more businesses downsizing Ralph .. but your poem is true and upbeat today and if for the contest.. good luck my friend.. luv your title.. no one seems to be giving much of an account anywhere ... enjoyed with luv..
Coulstock Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 9:45 AM
Hi Ralph. It's the same everywhere!And it always seems to be the queue that I join that they decide to close, just as I'm nearly there!You've got it absolutely spot on with your limerick.Very good and fun.Thanx Luv June(sylvia)
Mehta Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 9:33 AM
That is the everyday scene opne experiences in the present situations, Ralph. Quite witty
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