No Accounts

A good Bank keeps things balanced - that's key

But, one thing that sure gets to me

        Their counting ain't right

        with five windows in sight

It's only two tellers, I see!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 12/9/2010 4:09:00 AM
A good poet is great observer, and a great observer is a great critic ... and poetry is the palace where they all live. Well done, you have occupancy.
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Date: 11/12/2010 1:17:00 PM
Right on, Ralph!! (Or should I say write on?) I doubt these banks are ever fully staffed. It's the same way in supermarkets. Dozens of checkout counters, but only a couple are open. Thanks for sharing your humor with us! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2010 11:36:00 AM
lol. You are so right on with this Limerick. :-) Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 11/5/2010 8:09:00 AM
Isn't that the truth! Wonderful write, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 11/4/2010 6:58:00 PM
lol That's why I use my mattress my friend.....Larry
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Date: 11/4/2010 9:18:00 AM
sounds like a personal problem to me. john
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Date: 11/3/2010 12:04:00 PM
More and more businesses downsizing Ralph .. but your poem is true and upbeat today and if for the contest.. good luck my friend.. luv your title.. no one seems to be giving much of an account anywhere ... enjoyed with luv..
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Date: 11/3/2010 9:45:00 AM
Hi Ralph. It's the same everywhere!And it always seems to be the queue that I join that they decide to close, just as I'm nearly there!You've got it absolutely spot on with your limerick.Very good and fun.Thanx Luv June(sylvia)
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Date: 11/3/2010 9:33:00 AM
That is the everyday scene opne experiences in the present situations, Ralph. Quite witty
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