No!

No! No? No.
does that mean my love for you 
will never feel the warmth of the sun
see the beauty of the moons majestic light
hear the eternal roar of the ocean 
or from heights see it's glorious sight
shall we not wittness the blue green wings 
of the humming birds in flight
or even see the northern lights 
ponder the flowers that marvel
human thought
chase the rainbows elusive golden pot
come on 
live a little
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 5/16/2009 5:51:00 PM
Absolutely indeed agree with you!!! and I will take your comment as a compliment and not worry that you would take it but hope that you took it into your soul. Great write. -Alley
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Date: 4/28/2009 12:03:00 PM
very good but i cant help to wonder who your talking about
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Date: 4/28/2009 11:55:00 AM
funny comment john. thank you. i must say sleep doesn't come that easily to everyone. you are obviously one of the lucky ones. RAIN.....yes, yes, yes to this piece. good work!
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Date: 4/25/2009 9:53:00 PM
Light, airy a feel for nature but a longing for love. John you are such a romantic at heart. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/25/2009 9:14:00 AM
a warm and vivid poem here. you make it seem easy, john. masterfully done
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Date: 4/24/2009 4:58:00 PM
Hi John III, This poem seems whimsical; light and airy. It was pleasant to read. It has a nice flow and there is a lot of rhyming going on. You might want to list this one as rhyme form.
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Date: 4/23/2009 5:40:00 AM
No is a powerful word, but then again, so are all the words that follow here! So much so, they should most definitely rethink! Beautiful work! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/22/2009 3:43:00 PM
oo // (:>o)!!!!//----// // =oo Wow stand up dude!
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Date: 4/22/2009 3:43:00 PM
yes yes yes! good one there! Light & Love
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Date: 4/22/2009 3:27:00 PM
yes we live a little,thats a good advice on time,no!no?no!,i see love there somewhere deep inside the heart and soul,its like you re disapproving hard to something,and at the same time you re not sure of the situation surrounding,wonderfully penned and different-i love it--yes----well penned-charma
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