Early Jae Poet Rhyme

No

Why I now, "Just say no"



              Light turns to black
        Everything slowly fades away
      Mental faculties no longer react
        Curtain call to life's play
  The key factor in this demise flows through the veins
  Ravaging the body until nothing remains
    Nothing good that needle contained
  Next time may put me six feet under on my back


6/21/2019
Writing Challenge 1, June 2019, Crumbling Rhyme Poetry Contest
Dear Heart

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Constance La France June 30, 2019 at 7:13 PM EJ congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and sorry for my delay in visiting ~ Early Jae July 1, 2019 at 2:31 PM No worries at all! Thanks yet again for another great contest!!

Jan Allison June 30, 2019 at 6:38 PM sad on so many levels made me think of a drugs overdose:-( congrats on your win Early Jae Early Jae July 1, 2019 at 2:31 PM Yeah I've seen a few friends go that way. Thank you!

Susan Ashley June 25, 2019 at 9:58 PM Your potent pen captivated me, Early. A powerfully expressed piece. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Early Jae June 26, 2019 at 3:17 PM Thank you so much!

Jeanne Mcgee June 25, 2019 at 4:31 PM Congrats on your placement. Curtain call to life's play...nice. Early Jae June 26, 2019 at 3:16 PM :) Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2019 at 12:01 PM oh my, what a sad one. Anyway, I think you did a good job with the theme. Congrats on the winner list, EArly Jae Early Jae June 25, 2019 at 4:25 PM Thank you!

Arturo Michael June 21, 2019 at 6:10 PM A conscious write...if you have any doubts about ending in the grave...try it again...Good one... Early Jae June 23, 2019 at 11:03 PM Thanks! I do not, not any time soon any way :)