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Why I now, "Just say no" Light turns to black Everything slowly fades away Mental faculties no longer react Curtain call to life's play The key factor in this demise flows through the veins Ravaging the body until nothing remains Nothing good that needle contained Next time may put me six feet under on my back 6/21/2019 Writing Challenge 1, June 2019, Crumbling Rhyme Poetry Contest Dear Heart

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Date: 6/30/2019 7:13:00 PM
EJ congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and sorry for my delay in visiting ~
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Early Jae
Date: 7/1/2019 2:31:00 PM
No worries at all! Thanks yet again for another great contest!!
Date: 6/30/2019 6:38:00 PM
sad on so many levels made me think of a drugs overdose:-( congrats on your win Early Jae
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Date: 7/1/2019 2:31:00 PM
Yeah I've seen a few friends go that way. Thank you!
Date: 6/25/2019 9:58:00 PM
Your potent pen captivated me, Early. A powerfully expressed piece. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Early Jae
Date: 6/26/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 6/25/2019 4:31:00 PM
Congrats on your placement. Curtain call to life's play...nice.
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Date: 6/26/2019 3:16:00 PM
:) Thanks!
Date: 6/25/2019 12:01:00 PM
oh my, what a sad one. Anyway, I think you did a good job with the theme. Congrats on the winner list, EArly Jae
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Date: 6/25/2019 4:25:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/21/2019 6:10:00 PM
A conscious write...if you have any doubts about ending in the grave...try it again...Good one...
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Early Jae
Date: 6/23/2019 11:03:00 PM
Thanks! I do not, not any time soon any way :)

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