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Why I now, "Just say no"



              Light turns to black
        Everything slowly fades away
      Mental faculties no longer react
        Curtain call to life's play
  The key factor in this demise flows through the veins
  Ravaging the body until nothing remains
    Nothing good that needle contained
  Next time may put me six feet under on my back


6/21/2019
Writing Challenge 1, June 2019, Crumbling Rhyme Poetry Contest
Dear Heart

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Constance La France Date: 6/30/2019 7:13:00 PM EJ congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write and sorry for my delay in visiting ~ Login to Reply Early Jae Date: 7/1/2019 2:31:00 PM No worries at all! Thanks yet again for another great contest!!

Jan Allison Date: 6/30/2019 6:38:00 PM sad on so many levels made me think of a drugs overdose:-( congrats on your win Early Jae Login to Reply Early Jae Date: 7/1/2019 2:31:00 PM Yeah I've seen a few friends go that way. Thank you!

Susan Ashley Date: 6/25/2019 9:58:00 PM Your potent pen captivated me, Early. A powerfully expressed piece. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Early Jae Date: 6/26/2019 3:17:00 PM Thank you so much!

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 6/25/2019 4:31:00 PM Congrats on your placement. Curtain call to life's play...nice. Login to Reply Early Jae Date: 6/26/2019 3:16:00 PM :) Thanks!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/25/2019 12:01:00 PM oh my, what a sad one. Anyway, I think you did a good job with the theme. Congrats on the winner list, EArly Jae Login to Reply Early Jae Date: 6/25/2019 4:25:00 PM Thank you!

Arturo Michael Date: 6/21/2019 6:10:00 PM A conscious write...if you have any doubts about ending in the grave...try it again...Good one... Login to Reply Early Jae Date: 6/23/2019 11:03:00 PM Thanks! I do not, not any time soon any way :)