Nirvana

Stepping through its beaded door
was like walking into a time cloud, 
whiffs of marijuana and hashish pipes
lined up by color in the cabinet 
to the right, behind which stood
a hippie and his girl, with beads
and long hair, who lived in the VW van
parked in the rear, the one 
splattered with colorful peace 
signs like the psychedelic posters 
on their store’s walls, glowing
under the hidden black light. 

Nirvana was a safe haven, 
offering a calm which transcended 
my fifteen-year-old my psyche, 
magnified by the freedom 
to wander through without shoes 
or purchase, unlike the neighboring stores 
on Union Turnpike in the heart of Queens. 

The place exuded the potent energy
of my love generation. I wish 
there was a store like it here  
in my new neighborhood, but I suppose 
I’ll have to settle for the natural health 
food store, which offers the same sort of claim.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 10/30/2014 11:05:00 PM
I remember the store well and your description has brought back pleasant memories. I don't remember anyone smoking pot in the store. Bobby F. (The owner) was very careful since the neighborhood was out to close the store. I do remember the smells of incense (always burning), the dark store and black light highlighting the colorful posters hanging on the walls. At the time, Bobby owned a 450 Honda and a bunch of us would go riding after he closed the store for the evening.
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Date: 8/19/2008 1:44:00 PM
Hi Diana Nice to meet you, welcome to the soup! . Enjoyed. Congrats on your feature write this week! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 8/18/2008 12:29:00 PM
Diana - this poem takes me back to a time that I met and stayed with some really cool folk at a commune in North Eastern Washington when I was about 16 - that was 31 years ago - congrats on being featured this week
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Date: 8/18/2008 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations Diana on having your poem featured! Nicole
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Date: 8/18/2008 9:11:00 AM
Times have changed but the dreams are all the same, only updated to fit the times. I was 18 in'64, and I'd rather be there than 18 in a health food store. I liked this poem. Congratulations on it being featured. Vince
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Date: 8/18/2008 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations Diana on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/18/2008 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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