---Nine Torn Kimonos

nine torn kimonos
man sits staring out window---
bare arsed slacker

*a stitch in time saves 9
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Strand Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 11:42 PM
Thank you Debbie for the honour bestoed on my poem in your contest.Rgds Brian
Brown Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 7:05 AM
Congratulations Deb on your win in John Freeman's contest "Redneck Psalms,Improve Human Foible". Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 5:59 AM
Ah...Sew u won.. congrats on your big win in the Redneck Psalms contest with these wise words and awesome advice.. enjoy your big win TEACH.. with luv .. humble pupil "Sweetheart" in Hawai..AlohA.
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 11:51 PM
Good one, Deb. Congratulations. HOpe you have an enjoyable 4th of July weekend. LUv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
July 2, 2010 at 10:06 PM
Congratulations, Deborah on taking a 4th place in my contest. I've heard that saying somewhere. The stitch in time saves 9, though is more familar. Should have done that one. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 12:01 PM
HaHaHa.. funny one but how true .. my MOM always said a stitch in time saves nine... she was a sewing lady by trade... luv your question too..haha .. your wish is my command.. the " " are now gone.. see what an obedient pupil I am?? if only Ron could get me to do the same..haha.. with luv from the pupil in Hawaii...Ah ... Aloha..
Mitchell Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 8:08 PM
Lol!Maybe he couldn't fina a needle? ; )
Green Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 7:23 PM
HAHAHAHAHA! Good one!
Culverhouse Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 5:16 PM
funny, good one
Kendrick Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 3:01 PM
I wonder how those kimonos got torn???Sara
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 2:48 PM
If he sits on that bare arse long enough, a liberal will take care of him. God Bless. Vince
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