Nine O'Clock

I'm going to have dessert and put up my feet
At nine o'clock myself is who I'm going to treat
Nine o'clock is my favorite time of the day
It's 8:59 get out of my way
nine o'clock is when my kids go to sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/14/2010 9:59:00 PM
oh, and a fav!
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Date: 6/14/2010 9:58:00 PM
LOVE IT!
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Date: 4/21/2010 12:40:00 PM
You have kids. I have 2 beautiful young pups, three older felines and two intriguing parrots, one of whom, a cockatoo, eats with us at the table or we all hear her complaining. I like this as it is the mundane truth. You're placing in the contests, I see. Good for you, my dear! Just stay on top of that spelliing! Love, Gerard!
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Date: 4/17/2010 9:06:00 AM
Woo hoo some me time...Very cute Faleshia....God Bless Taz
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Date: 4/17/2010 4:34:00 AM
Enjoy your free and relaxing time, Faleshia! I have no kids, but I'm also enjoying the evenings when it is getting quiet outside. Nicely done Limerick! Thank you for your comments. I'm back on PS with some new Tanka after my visitors have left. Wishing you a nice and sunny weekend...Gert
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Date: 4/16/2010 10:10:00 AM
I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Faleshia. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2010 10:40:00 PM
very nice
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Date: 4/15/2010 10:15:00 PM
Very humorous write. I could detect the humour
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Date: 4/15/2010 7:47:00 PM
Very funny I like the humor in this one. You do write good limericks. I am not good with them . Keep it up. p.d.
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Date: 4/15/2010 2:57:00 PM
I know you get ready a 40 ..oh I mean 8:40 talk to ya at 9:01
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Date: 4/15/2010 1:57:00 PM
It's great to have some time to yourself after the kids go to bed, Faleshia. You've earned it! I find myself spending too much time alone. Feast or famine, as they say. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/15/2010 1:56:00 PM
Great Limerick...Been there done that....Great topic that you have chosen...Sara
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Date: 4/15/2010 1:46:00 PM
Peace, at last, eh Faleshia! Sweet! That's minus the calories! LOL....Thanks for reading and posting your kind comments to my poem....Peace, Audrey
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Date: 4/15/2010 1:05:00 PM
Great Limerick.....What's for dessert?....Larry
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Date: 4/15/2010 1:00:00 PM
peace and quiet---mmmm sounds nice!
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Date: 4/15/2010 12:57:00 PM
Enjoy Faleshia..u earned this dessert for yourself ...after a hard day with the kiddies..luv.. so enjoyed your creativity today..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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