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Nine O'Clock

I'm going to have dessert and put up my feet
At nine o'clock myself is who I'm going to treat
Nine o'clock is my favorite time of the day
It's 8:59 get out of my way
nine o'clock is when my kids go to sleep

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Andrea Dietrich

June 14, 2010 at 9:59 PM

oh, and a fav!

Andrea Dietrich

June 14, 2010 at 9:58 PM

LOVE IT!

Gerard Keogh Jr.

April 21, 2010 at 12:40 PM

You have kids. I have 2 beautiful young pups, three older felines and two intriguing parrots, one of whom, a cockatoo, eats with us at the table or we all hear her complaining. I like this as it is the mundane truth. You're placing in the contests, I see. Good for you, my dear! Just stay on top of that spelliing! Love, Gerard!

Richard Pickett

April 17, 2010 at 9:06 AM

Woo hoo some me time...Very cute Faleshia....God Bless Taz

Gert W. Knop

April 17, 2010 at 4:34 AM

Enjoy your free and relaxing time, Faleshia! I have no kids, but I'm also enjoying the evenings when it is getting quiet outside. Nicely done Limerick! Thank you for your comments. I'm back on PS with some new Tanka after my visitors have left. Wishing you a nice and sunny weekend...Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 16, 2010 at 10:10 AM

I am so pleased to have been able to read your poetry this morning Faleshia. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

April 15, 2010 at 10:40 PM

very nice

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 15, 2010 at 10:15 PM

Very humorous write. I could detect the humour

Poet Destroyer A

April 15, 2010 at 7:47 PM

Very funny I like the humor in this one. You do write good limericks. I am not good with them . Keep it up. p.d.

Keshia Murphy

April 15, 2010 at 2:57 PM

I know you get ready a 40 ..oh I mean 8:40 talk to ya at 9:01

Carolyn Devonshire

April 15, 2010 at 1:57 PM

It's great to have some time to yourself after the kids go to bed, Faleshia. You've earned it! I find myself spending too much time alone. Feast or famine, as they say. Love, Carolyn