Nine Month Night

Nine month night - light broke free like dawn. In babe’s face, impassioned pinking. From romance of wishful thinking - Too many threads to count, forgone. Potent, when God, she called upon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Crandall Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 3:37 PM
Great one, Kim. Each of the five lines is powerful and evocative. I think I like line 1 best.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 23, 2024 at 3:44 PM
Thank you! Glad I set the mood, for you, in the initial line! :)
DiMino Avatar
May 1, 2024 at 6:35 AM
The mystery of life, the mystery of love, the mystery of creation -- what keeps me coming back to God, enthralled with God, is His endearing, never ending mystery. One experiences first-hand through Christ.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 1, 2024 at 9:13 AM
Thanks, Joe!
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