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Nine Month Night

Nine month night - light broke free like dawn. In babe’s face, impassioned pinking. From romance of wishful thinking - Too many threads to count, forgone. Potent, when God, she called upon.

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Date: 5/23/2024 3:37:00 PM
Great one, Kim. Each of the five lines is powerful and evocative. I think I like line 1 best.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2024 3:44:00 PM
Thank you! Glad I set the mood, for you, in the initial line! :)
Date: 5/1/2024 6:35:00 AM
The mystery of life, the mystery of love, the mystery of creation -- what keeps me coming back to God, enthralled with God, is His endearing, never ending mystery. One experiences first-hand through Christ.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2024 9:13:00 AM
Thanks, Joe!

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