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Nina's Freedom

Tears and pain overwhelming, The sun shows no mercy to every soul working, Nina slaves to work the fields, Her master rages and pounds his fist , With violence he conjures fear at his fingertips, The days grew long and weary, Nina gazed at the flowers on the hillside, and sought comfort in their beauty, Born into a life of slavery, She longed for freedom and a release from her misery, One day she mustered all that she can , Running from the fields with hope in hand, Nina discovers a place, unfamiliar, She looks high and low for a sign of welcome, Wanting nothing but to fit in, From a distance she sees a man, He walks towards her with a smile and extends his hand, Sensing only serenity and a nature forged of good, Nina agrees to his companionship Following him giving thanks to God, Years pass and Nina finds peace, All feelings and memories of her past , ceased, She tends to her flowers, with a gentle smile , And tells herself , "To find this heaven i would have walked a thousand miles"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/7/2013 6:36:00 PM
All of those who walk and walked this path were brave beyond words. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 8/19/2013 1:21:00 AM
Thanks Debbie :)
Date: 8/5/2013 9:04:00 PM
This is lovely. Deserves a great Win. Congratulation!
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 8/6/2013 10:43:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 8/5/2013 7:39:00 PM
This is so moving and triumphant, exactly what I was looking for. Congratulations and thanks for entering my contest.
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 8/5/2013 7:51:00 PM
Thank you so much Richard and i look forward to entering into more of your competitions :) God Bless :)
Date: 8/5/2013 5:14:00 PM
Its nice to have a happy ending....congratulations on your win....
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 8/5/2013 7:08:00 PM
Thanks Donna :)
Date: 8/5/2013 10:25:00 AM
- Congratulations on a wonderful first place, Chandrasekar! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 8/5/2013 10:28:00 AM
Thank you kindly Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/5/2013 9:55:00 AM
Beautiful..congratulations on your win..:) cheriex
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 8/5/2013 9:57:00 AM
Thanks Cherie :)
Date: 8/5/2013 9:47:00 AM
congratulations... SKAT
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 8/5/2013 9:53:00 AM
Thank you kindly SKAT :)
Date: 8/5/2013 9:41:00 AM
How touching and beautiful...Nothing like the taste of freedom! Congratulations on your fine win! :)
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 8/5/2013 9:53:00 AM
Thank you kindly Eileen :)
Date: 8/5/2013 9:35:00 AM
Congrats !
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 8/5/2013 9:52:00 AM
Thanks Danesh :)
Date: 8/5/2013 9:08:00 AM
very nice C S congrats on your win Shadow x smiles
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 8/5/2013 9:52:00 AM
Thank you so much for your well wishes :D
Date: 8/5/2013 8:59:00 AM
C S., ... Congratulations in Richard's "Girl Rising." contest.... always *LINDA
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Chandrasekar Singaram
Date: 8/5/2013 9:03:00 AM
Thanks Linda : )
Date: 8/2/2013 2:24:00 AM
Very well written very sad though, a life in slavery,, how blessed we are born now and where slavery no longer destroys life,, imagery very good, well done, blessings sueellen
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