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Nimisha

In her layette, she looked fair. ‘Nimisha’, the parents called her. When aged five, the polio plucked the strings that her legs moved. As a stringless violin, her legs rest. In the wheelchair, she grows up along with her mother’s tension, and father’s anxiety. The rustic children wish her but nobody takes her to the festival in a shrine rural. She wears new dress but as the butterflies in her frock, she also cannot flit to the shrine yard. Cough waves, today also, shake her lungs so. The distant drumbeats and the holy music move her fingers in the wind rhythmic. The clarion does resonate and ripple the divine thoughts in her ears. She never knew pneumonia packing her soul. Serenity of the twilight collapses as, again, the drum storm develops. Few knew Nimisha swooned. Later, the people intoned, “Being holy, an apt day it is.” In emptiness infinite, her parents knew her truly.

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Date: 10/20/2019 4:13:00 AM
This is such an expressive and touching poem, Fabiyas. I'm 9 years late in congratulating you on your win! Regards // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 10/22/2019 9:44:00 AM
Thank you so much, Fabiyas. In fact I came across your book after my attention was drawn to it by a mutual friend. I will come back to you. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/20/2019 11:24:00 AM
Thanks, Paul! If you want my new book, "Shelter within the Peanut Shells", kindly send an email to "mvfabiyas@yahoo.com" Warm regards,
Date: 10/18/2012 9:04:00 PM
Fab, another be-late congrats on your awesome win...pd
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Date: 9/21/2012 9:24:00 PM
what a very sad poem so poignantly worded. I see this garnered an award for you. Belated Congratulations to you.
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Date: 3/7/2012 8:55:00 PM
Congrats on your win in PD's contest, Fabiyas! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/7/2012 6:09:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Fab. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 8:46:00 AM
Beautiful Fabiyas. Congratulations
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Date: 3/5/2012 8:02:00 PM
congrats Fabiyas on an eloquent write and win luv.. a champion piece luv..
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Date: 3/5/2012 9:26:00 AM
Congrats, Fabiyas. Awesome write. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 3/4/2012 6:50:00 PM
Fab, .congratulations! in my contest...muched enjoyed your entry,;-) always*PD
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Date: 11/13/2011 7:08:00 PM
Hi Fabiyas~This is an amazing poem and describes what wheelchair bound children incur day after day...I love the last lines the most...purely a beauty. Congrats on this honored win. What'd ya do with your cash prize? Gwendolen
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Date: 10/27/2011 9:17:00 PM
A sad and heartfelt poem that reaches out to the reader...your diction is super and your message is moving. Congratulations on your win but especially for sharing your potential and touching the reader. Well done!
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Date: 9/10/2011 9:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in PS's Intl. Contest, Fabiyas. Love, Annalise
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Date: 8/23/2011 9:08:00 PM
Congrats FABIYAS on your wonderful win in PS contest .. excellent write my friend.. enjoy winnings...luv..
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Date: 8/23/2011 3:47:00 PM
Congratulations April, 2011 7th Place Contest Winner! Outstanding imagery! Great presentation. Caryl Ramsdale
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Date: 8/23/2011 7:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in PoetrySoup's International Poetry Contest Fabiyas. I am very happy for you. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/22/2011 4:45:00 PM
Congratulations Fabiyas on your big win in the International Contest.Beautiful poem.
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Date: 8/22/2011 12:38:00 PM
I am so proud and happy to see you winning in this international contest, on the 7th place, Congratulations, Fabiyas
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem, Fabiyas. Enjoy your winnings. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/22/2011 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations Fabiyas on your fabulous Soup win with this wonderful write. Enjoy your honor, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 8/22/2011 9:37:00 AM
Awesome work, Fabiyas. Congratulations on your great win in Soup Admin's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/22/2011 8:17:00 AM
A very touching verse! Many congrats on your amazing win in poetry soup international contest. *Cheers*
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Date: 8/22/2011 8:11:00 AM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 8/21/2011 11:32:00 PM
Very moving verse, Fabiyas.. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN IN THE POETRY SOUP COMPETITION. Elaine
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Date: 8/7/2011 5:17:00 PM
Congrats FABIYAS on having this poem make it to first round competition in PS contest luv..G.L..
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Date: 8/7/2011 11:42:00 AM
Many congratulations Fabiyas on making it to first round of winners in Poetrysoup contest. Winning wishes for the final round. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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