Nimisha

In her layette, she looked fair.
‘Nimisha’, the parents called her.
When aged five, the polio plucked
the strings that her legs moved.
As a stringless violin, her legs rest.
In the wheelchair, she grows up
along with her mother’s tension,
and father’s anxiety.

The rustic children wish her
but nobody takes her
to the festival
in a shrine rural.
She wears new dress
but as the butterflies in her frock,
she also cannot flit
to the shrine yard.

Cough waves, today also, 
shake her lungs so.
The distant drumbeats and the holy music
move her fingers in the wind rhythmic.
The clarion does resonate and ripple
the divine thoughts in her ears.
She never knew 
pneumonia packing her soul.

Serenity of the twilight collapses
as, again, the drum storm develops.
Few knew Nimisha swooned.
Later, the people intoned,
“Being holy, 
an apt day it is.”
In emptiness infinite,
her parents knew her truly.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Callus Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 4:13 AM
This is such an expressive and touching poem, Fabiyas. I'm 9 years late in congratulating you on your win! Regards // paul
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October 22, 2019 at 9:44 AM
Thank you so much, Fabiyas. In fact I came across your book after my attention was drawn to it by a mutual friend. I will come back to you. Regards // paul
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October 20, 2019 at 11:24 AM
Thanks, Paul! If you want my new book, "Shelter within the Peanut Shells", kindly send an email to "[email protected]" Warm regards,
A   Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 9:04 PM
Fab, another be-late congrats on your awesome win...pd
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 9:24 PM
what a very sad poem so poignantly worded. I see this garnered an award for you. Belated Congratulations to you.
Merryman Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 8:55 PM
Congrats on your win in PD's contest, Fabiyas! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 6:09 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Fab. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 8:46 AM
Beautiful Fabiyas. Congratulations
Sweetheart Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 8:02 PM
congrats Fabiyas on an eloquent write and win luv.. a champion piece luv..
Taylor Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 9:26 AM
Congrats, Fabiyas. Awesome write. Nice going. Ralph
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March 4, 2012 at 6:50 PM
Fab, .congratulations! in my contest...muched enjoyed your entry,;-) always*PD
Song Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 7:08 PM
Hi Fabiyas~This is an amazing poem and describes what wheelchair bound children incur day after day...I love the last lines the most...purely a beauty. Congrats on this honored win. What'd ya do with your cash prize? Gwendolen
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October 27, 2011 at 9:17 PM
A sad and heartfelt poem that reaches out to the reader...your diction is super and your message is moving. Congratulations on your win but especially for sharing your potential and touching the reader. Well done!
Haick Avatar
September 10, 2011 at 9:34 PM
Congratulations on your win in PS's Intl. Contest, Fabiyas. Love, Annalise
Sweetheart Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 9:08 PM
Congrats FABIYAS on your wonderful win in PS contest .. excellent write my friend.. enjoy winnings...luv..
Ramsdale Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 3:47 PM
Congratulations April, 2011 7th Place Contest Winner! Outstanding imagery! Great presentation. Caryl Ramsdale
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on your placement in PoetrySoup's International Poetry Contest Fabiyas. I am very happy for you. Love, Carol
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August 22, 2011 at 4:45 PM
Congratulations Fabiyas on your big win in the International Contest.Beautiful poem.
Mehta Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 12:38 PM
I am so proud and happy to see you winning in this international contest, on the 7th place, Congratulations, Fabiyas
Freeman Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem, Fabiyas. Enjoy your winnings. Agape, Moses
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August 22, 2011 at 10:17 AM
Congratulations Fabiyas on your fabulous Soup win with this wonderful write. Enjoy your honor, I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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August 22, 2011 at 9:37 AM
Awesome work, Fabiyas. Congratulations on your great win in Soup Admin's contest! Love, Carolyn
Osita Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 8:17 AM
A very touching verse! Many congrats on your amazing win in poetry soup international contest. *Cheers*
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August 22, 2011 at 8:11 AM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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August 21, 2011 at 11:32 PM
Very moving verse, Fabiyas.. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN IN THE POETRY SOUP COMPETITION. Elaine
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 5:17 PM
Congrats FABIYAS on having this poem make it to first round competition in PS contest luv..G.L..
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2011 at 11:42 AM
Many congratulations Fabiyas on making it to first round of winners in Poetrysoup contest. Winning wishes for the final round. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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