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Nighttime Serenity

A train
A whistle
A full moon
Feelings amassed
In proportions
Awesome and tranquil
Nighttime emotion
Become so serene
Just like those lamplights
And bedtime fans
Twirling in twilight
Adjusting to the night
Eyes see little
But the leftover reds
From the light
As night commences
In full accord
Only the sound of the train
Clanking down the tracks
And the distant whistle
Remain 
And the sound 
Of the fan
Whirl-winding around
In complete rhythm
To the train
And the moons escape
Towards infinity
As night moves along
And I drift off to sleep…

Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/17/2017 11:03:00 PM
Beautiful, I always loved the sounds of a train at night!
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Date: 10/8/2017 9:02:00 PM
This is really nice, Russell. It's got lots of soothing images (except for the clanking train!!) but really puts you in the mind of someone trying to sleep. Love it.
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Date: 10/8/2017 6:29:00 PM
Nicely done... take me with you...
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Date: 10/8/2017 9:08:00 AM
Lovely flow this morning!
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Date: 10/8/2017 1:42:00 AM
This gem is a depiction of beauty. The line, the flow and the purpose of the the poem. Excellently penned.
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Date: 10/7/2017 11:02:00 AM
Wow this was very enjoyable to read. I was drawn right into it Russell. Very well done! :)
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:30:00 AM
You took me on a journey in your world in this poem.. This flows so well.. An excellent write Russell..
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Date: 10/7/2017 8:03:00 AM
I enjoy a poem that invites me along for the ride, good work, Russell!
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Date: 10/7/2017 6:51:00 AM
I feel the silence of the night--interrupted only by the sound of the train and rhythm of a fan--happy dreams my friend in the company of a full moon! Good work, Russell!
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