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Nighttime Musings- For Contest

chest rises and falls
who excites her sleeping sighs
best not to ask her

dreamsenryu

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Dalia Shahein

December 28, 2015 at 11:32 AM

Lol , I really enjoyed reading your poem my friend beautiful write , great as always...Happy new year for u and all of ur beloved one's and hugs / / :) dalia

James Fraser

December 26, 2015 at 11:14 AM

Love this cute and dangerous Senyru Viv, very clever ;) ~~ smiles ~~ James :)

Viv Wigley

December 27, 2015 at 1:58 AM

If we could read dreams, James, how would the divorce lawyers ever cope? Have a happy and prosperous New year. All the best, Viv

Robert Lindley

December 15, 2015 at 11:16 PM

Man, you woke my beast and the wife is fast asleep. lol Superb Senryu my friend ! A7

Viv Wigley

December 15, 2015 at 11:53 PM

Stop musing and get back to sleep, Robert :) . Thanks for dropping by- hope you're doing o.k. Regards, Viv

James Inman

December 15, 2015 at 11:49 AM

We all have our fantasies, Viv. As long as I'm the one she wakes up with in the morning everything's good. Nice Senryu.

Viv Wigley

December 15, 2015 at 10:22 PM

Exactly, James. But I hope that your good lady doesn't talk in your sleep like mine does. Regards, Viv

Paul Callus

December 11, 2015 at 2:59 PM

Unless she talks in her sleep, better off to live in ignorance...or is it?! A lovely senryu...so is the visual that goes with it! ~ Regards // paul

Viv Wigley

December 11, 2015 at 8:57 PM

Thanks Paul.The visual obviously isn't my missus, since we don't sleep with the light on. Which means I'm not faced with slices of cucumber, face cream , rollers and other erotic paraphernalia.... Regards, Viv

Sandra Haight

December 11, 2015 at 1:37 PM

Nice one, Viv! Gosh, my hubby becomes "breathless" while sleeping because he has sleep apnea...guess I should think about that! :) :) GL wishes for the contest. Sandra

Viv Wigley

December 11, 2015 at 8:58 PM

...but I'm sure that his name is the only one to escape from your dreams, Sandra, after all these years. Viv x