Night's Devotion

Gasping in passion, Thy full lashes enchants me, Lips of confection, We drove in vast ecstasy, 'Twas pure love and devotion.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hilario Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 11:53 AM
very vivid, I can imagine myself on that situation - keep writing Czarinyka
Zaire Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 12:55 PM
Thank you Michael, appreciate it much :)
Nunez Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 7:45 AM
Lovely and hot images Czari (may I call you that?)
Zaire Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Sure, nice knowing you kim..
Nance Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 7:10 AM
Oh that sounds terrific, passion in every word!
Zaire Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 7:16 AM
Thank you it was my first attempt of Tanka, and I'm glad I somehow have done justice to it.
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