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Nightmares of a Traveling Man '05

The depth of my decisions, The aching of my soul. Empty, untouched suitcase, Longing to be whole. A wasteful want left hungry, Echoes through these rooms. Leaves and vines keeping growing, Beneath the darkened gloom. Why must I lie dying? Clinging to the seams, My mind a field of wonder, Softly slumbering in green.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/18/2008 4:57:00 PM
This poem is very good I like the aliteration"wasteful want" and the end rhyme. The form is rhyme and would read most easily grouped by 4's. Light & Love Debbie
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