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Nightmare --------- Love

after my nightmare...

even though you sleep

you cradle me






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For Andrea's "Nothing But Love Haiku" contest
1/19/14

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Barbara Gorelick

January 25, 2014 at 8:08 AM

hello my California pal..good one and congrats. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 25, 2014 at 7:48 AM

- Carrie - Congratulations on your beautiful winning poem in: Nothing But Love Contest - Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

January 25, 2014 at 3:23 AM

What an excellent entry and wonderful win for you Carrie. Congratulations!

Juliet Ligon

January 24, 2014 at 9:56 PM

How comforting. this one warms my heart. Congrats, Carrie!

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 24, 2014 at 8:04 PM

Congratulations on the fine win in the contest, Nothing But Love, Carrie

Andrea Dietrich

January 24, 2014 at 7:47 PM

this is so sweet, Carrie and just how I like a senryu to read.. Again, I was totally fooled by you guys this time. I had no idea I was picking yours, or Kash's or Jack's! Congratulations to you.

Eileen Manassian

January 20, 2014 at 9:10 AM

WOW! Carrie....I read it twice and ....like Richard.......I find I need to sort out my feelings on this...Hmmmmmm....It's so profound! You would come up with something other than that mushy ooey gooey stuff! ;) I wish I could know exactly what was going on in your mind when you wrote this. OH.....the aftereffects of a nightmare still....are with you....in your wakefulness...cradling your mind? Good one, and good luck!

Richard Lamoureux

January 20, 2014 at 7:48 AM

This has a creppy feel to it. I don't know if that was the intention but if so bravo!

Russell Sivey

January 19, 2014 at 11:55 PM

This is perfect for Andrea's contest, you nailed it here! I truly enjoyed reading this remarkable poem this evening! What a magnificent piece Carrie, quite grandiose, Great Work!!

Nightmare --------- Love

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